The Wrong Lust - Comments

oh wow.. poor jane D:
I realized your stories have a dark-ish theme to them
where do you get your ideas?
do you ever get writer's block? when/if you do, what do you do to get out of it?

I haven't been on mibba for a while and now that I'm back I find wonderful updates
Oh my John has finally come to his senses
for some reason I knew Jasmine was fake in some sort of way

yes yes yes yes yes!!!!!
is he really gonna break up with Jasmine?!
I hate her!
I want them all back together!
please update soon

Yayyy I think John is realizing hes a douche bag lol :-)

YAY I feel so happy now!!!!! XD
So that's when John finally realized why Jane was so distant with every male was because their father began to rape her when no one was around.
Wow Jane is probably the only suffered the most from the abused they received from their father because not only did she get beat but she also got raped by the one man that was suppose to protect her things like that.
So together they made through high school because they had each other but after her father started doing that she began to break around away from them because of what she thought that all boys do that.
I am glad that they came home early and saved Jane from anymore pain that her father caused to her.
Well at least they made through that terrible event in their past and banded together so they can make it through anything.
I see that both Jane and John have realized that they can't replace each other no matter much they are attracted to another person, I just hope Johnathan realize it too.
YAY John is finally missing his twin sister love and just her being there for him.
As much as I want John to suffer I want him and Jane to be together.
I love how you gave them names that started with J's!!!!!!!!!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD

update soon plzzzz!!

I LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE THIS STORY!! what i like the most is that we cant guess the end <3<3

Why is veryone so amd at Jasmine? I personally like her ( but I'm only on chapter 15) I hope they all form healthy realtionships with people outside of their family.

Wow so she is spending more time with Trevor and Vincent?
I kinda feel that she is slowly spiraling out of control when she is trying to forgot her two heartless brothers.
Drinking her sorrows away isn't the answer, she should talk to Trevor about her problems because he seems the type to listen and give advice. I think he would really listen despite his personality.
So now her "brothers" don't start in the room anymore or even come home at all?
Wow that is really a shitty thing to do, they should at least be there for her when she does get home because I bet she needs someone right now.
She is truly alone, after all she has done for the family, letting John go so he can experience a "normal life" after what their father said.
And just letting Johnathan go without a fight after he broke his promise to her to never leave her like John did.
I wonder if her no good brothers will notice her pain or just be oblivious it because they are "happy" with the people they are with.
She is one broken little Ballerina that had her heart shattered by the two people she ever loved more than anything.
John and Johnathan should have a taste of what Jane is going through so they can really feel the pain she is hiding from plain view.
I feel she might do something to herself soon because the hole in her chest will only get bigger each passing day.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!

This story has taken over my life. Well, all right, that's a tiny bit dramatic, but it did help me when I wasn't able to sleep - gives me something good to read.

Your writing style is fantastic.
I could feel the emotions of each Jane, John, and Johnathan, be it sad or full of lust.

That being said, my favourite is one of the men - whoever moved on first.
I don't care much for Jane and her sudden attitude change.
Mind you, it's understandable, but still!

There's not much else to say.
Great work! I hope you update soon.

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Thankyou for updating, it was a bit of a filler but thats ok, thankyou once again and plz update soon!!!!!!

Wow now the triplets finally realize how much they miss each other and the consequences of their decisions of how they lead their lives.
I don't think they can ever recover from the break they all suffered mainly Jane.
Sometimes things break and can't be put back together.
In their case, their relationship with each other, they can never go back to how things were because the things they went through has changed so much that they have to depend on themselves.
I just can't believe how slow John is to realize that just leaving his sister twin will cause a butterfly effect, now he is almost seeing her everywhere.
And Johnathan too I thought he had more control but I guess I was wrong about him being there for Jane after she got her heart trampled on by her younger twin.
Now they both can feel the pain of having someone taken away from you.
I so want them to be the way they were before any one came in ruined their happiness, but with the story coming so far, I don't think they ever will because this change in their lifestyle has changed them so much and how they view each other.
Especially Jane because she knows that her brothers have touched someone else and have been intimate with that person and I think she won't be able to stand them anymore since that someone has laid their hands on her brother and they have too.
Same way with the boys too.
I can;t wait ti find out how the story will turn out so PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD

~evil laughter~ Now Johnathan finally sees that Jane doens't love him as she did before, he left her in the dark outside the bar.
Well if Jasmine the bimbo and Ryan the oblivious didn't come in the picture then Jane would still be depending on her brothers and loving them still.
Too late for Johnathan to realize that he just lose his little sister and she doesn't need him anymore.
I hate to say this but Johnathan was kind slow finding out that Jane no longer needs him, well at least he is a lot faster than John who is still clueless as usual.
I am so happy that Jane is finally breaking away from the lust she had with her brothers and discovering new things that she held back because of her brothers.
Hmmmm now that I think about it, Jane should finally experience what love really is with another person, like when a girl goes out the first time with a boy.
I look forward to the next update and hope it'll be soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD

I'm truly amazed:) Update soon please!

poor Johnathan!
but it's his fault too that Jane is changing!
please update

OMFG!!! john fucked her?!!] ugh i never knew that! now im pissed >.< but i still love your story :)

Stupid Jasmine and her comment about Jane!!!!
She doesn't anything so she shouldn't put her input in.
She doesn't know that the triplets lost the only person that ever loved them and that Jane was raped by her own father!!!!!
So she should keep her trap shut about Jane and her activities!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
God I hate her gut with passion!!!!
John shouldn't just start worrying about Jane all of a sudden because of the little incident at the club.
He doesn't know that she standing on her own now and that she getting over him and Johnathan.
Before he wouldn't even give her a second glance because of Jasmine but now he thinks he can still protect her after what he did to her heart.
I am happy that she found two other guys that will be hers.
I wonder how the boys will react when they see that Trevor and Vincent are acting affectionate toward Jane and now that she won't let her brothers touch her anymore.
I bet they would be crushed but that's what they deserved when they decided that their sister isn't enough for them.
I will continue to hate them both until Jane is finally happy!!!!!! And that Jasmine is out of the picture for good including Ryan!!!!!!!!!!
This chapter is short but I still enjoyed reading what John was thinking except the Jasmine part.
Jane should defiantly move out of the house so that she can heal her broken heart and move on with her life with Vincent and Trevor.
Go Jane!!!!!!!!!!
I hope the next chapter will be longer and I can't wait for the next update and hope it'll be soon!!!!!

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It IS kinda short, but I'd rather have a filler than nothing :) Thanks! Update soon please <3

- I started reading and I couldn't stop . I cried multiple times during this . )': Update . <3 ;D