The Wrong Lust - Comments

I'm reading this a year later and still loving it as much as I did in the first place. I've said this before, and even though the story's over, you did an amazing job writing this.

Love.
Im in LOVE with this story.
Jonathans my favorite. ;]
Im only on the eleventh chapter sooo dont update just yet ;P

i love the way your brain works
the perfect kind of fucked up :D

I love this story :] great job!

i absolutely loved this story <3 amazing.

aweeee i really loved this story :)

i lovvved this story

I have to say, I'm quite sad this story is over. It's so wonderful, nothing like I've ever read before.
It's simply brilliant, and I just adore the way you write. You're really good and I hope one day you become a famous author. This story will probably stay on my top favorites. I absolutely love and adore it. I think the last line was my favorite line through the whole expanse of the story. Lovely story, beautiful ending. Thank you for sharing this with us.

-i have been silently reading, without commenting. >.< but i figure it's time for me to now comment.
i cant say how much this story was touching and how well it was written. <3

BEST ENDING LINE I HAVE EVER HEARD! AMAZING JOB! <3

Are you going to have a sequel??? =)

Awwhhh its all over now D: no moar awesome updates

They are finally back together!!!!!!!!!
I am so happy that John finally realized that he could have lost both of his siblings if he did decided to stay with that other chick.
So now Jane is teaching dancing lessons, her true passion, John is building a new hospital and Johnathan is looking after them now.
YES! they finally moved out of that horrid place that was once they home and got a new place for themselves.
Now they won't have to worry about their ever hurting them again.
The ending was so serene and peaceful, just them there lying in bed, holding each other and sleeping peacefully.
I have very much enjoyed reading this story, a lot of angst and love, you really captured the love between the siblings.
You have done an excellent job writing this story! XD
BRAVO!!!!!!!

A very good run indeed, I'm sad to see this go.

I loved the sotry. It really made me think. And the ending was perfect. Really perfect. So i had to tel you :)

update soon!!?? plz =)

that was just amazing!!
i am truly amazed at your writing
;p

:D I'm reading yewr story on mah brothers ipod :D ohhhh yyyeee I'm cool like that

Holly crappers! yay im so happy that they are toghther agsain xD does that makes me a asick person? Well im not cuz i do not think of my siblings that way but still i cant help it that im happy there toghther again :) come on everyone and comment so we can get the last chapter!

omg!! i am waiting the last chapter!! i love this story!!