October 22nd, 2010 at 05:06am
Danger Line - Comments
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its kinda like stepbrothers, and stuff. pleeeease dont let penelope get in the wayyy?(:October 22nd, 2010 at 04:32am
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Gah, I love this story. It seems like Kari is already starting to show signs of PTSD. I hope Matt will accept that and help her through it. It's a tough thing to deal with. I'm so looking forward to reading the next chapter.October 22nd, 2010 at 04:12am
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unbelivableOctober 22nd, 2010 at 03:50am
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I want to like Kari. I really do, but i just have this feeling about her that I can't shake.October 22nd, 2010 at 12:45am
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Oh cheese and crackers, what is Kari hiding? Your writing makes me curious. You must satisfy this curiousity or I shall die like the cat! 'Curiousty killed the cat, but satisfaction brought it back,' <---hehe :{D (Happy face with a mustache!) UPDATE SOON!October 21st, 2010 at 10:44pm
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OMG! So what is she hiding about her hair? Did something happen to her in the explosion? Update soon!October 21st, 2010 at 05:31pm
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Oh wow this one was intense.
:( Kari is backkkkOctober 21st, 2010 at 02:56pm -
I'm so glad that they still love each other!
:)
please updateOctober 21st, 2010 at 01:30pm -
awesome!!!shes back!!! write more soon!October 21st, 2010 at 12:20pm
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omg she's alive!!!!!! what's going to happen to ms. penny?????? i cant wait any longer!!!!October 21st, 2010 at 10:15am
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it's totally awesome that you updated when i was having touble sleeping. xD i feel kind of bad about penelope though. what are they going to do with her empty grave? and technically she's prononced dead, so do they have to get married again? or maybe matt has to "die" and they get married like in a little piece of heaven? haha jk xDOctober 21st, 2010 at 09:31am
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Wow so she was alive all this time?
Woah and she doesn't want to relive the place she was at?
OMG what happened to the baby that was growing inside her?!
Aw a happy reunion, but she is right about the atmosphere being different.
Because Matt was going to move one and it was Damien's teacher!!!!! XP
I really hope she doesn't get any closer to Matt because Kari really needs him more than ever.
So the teacher was looking forward to starting a relationship with Matt but got disappointed when she heard that his wife was still alive.
Kinda of selfish dontcha think?
I look forward to the next update and hope it'll be soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XDOctober 21st, 2010 at 08:54am -
O_O
I stared, I was just like, mind fucked. There is no better word for it.
I was hoping that she'd be alive, but then it was like 'two years later' and I was like "maybe not?" and then she ended up being alive, so I pretty much shit bricks.
You woman have skills. :D
Sorry for the meh worthy comment, I'm just kind of speechless.
Excellent chapter though. :DOctober 17th, 2010 at 11:28am -
ALIVE?!
oh my janis!!!
I screamed when I read that!
update soooooon, please! :)October 17th, 2010 at 09:48am -
I feel like i'm the only one who suspected that she was still alive! and to have Brittany Murphy play penelope is very fitting. great story. I was working on something like this a long time ago and can't find it :( Great update though.October 16th, 2010 at 10:47pm
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I knew she was alive woot :-) Good I didnt like that Penelope bitch she was no Kari xDDDOctober 16th, 2010 at 10:45pm
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SHE'S FUCKING ALIVE?!?!!?!!?!!!!!!!! WHAT THE FUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!? WHERE HAS SHE BEEN FOR TWO FUCKING YEARS!??!?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?!October 16th, 2010 at 06:35pm
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duuuuuuuuudddddeeee, whhhattt the fuck just happened?!?!? lol shits bout to get real!October 16th, 2010 at 08:38am
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oh damn! She's alive o:
I can't believe that. and just
when he thought he could finally
move on.October 16th, 2010 at 07:15am
I know they'd would need to work
through things but I really don't wanna
see them split up. D: