Danger Line - Comments

OH MY GOSH THAT WAS AN AMAZING STORY!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved it soooo much!!! I just cannot describe the amazingness in this story!!!!! It made me laugh, cry, and flip out. Haha. It really did!!! I loved it!!!!!!!!!! Now I shall go stalk your other stories!! :D

~T. Strange~

Aw I just read this and I really really enjoyed it! Excellent job :)

So I'm just starting to read this and I just got done with chapter one. I just want to say WHY THE HELL IS THERE A SMILEY FACE IN THE AUTHORS NOTE! It should be a frowny face. By the way, I'm crying, and I feel like a weenie for saying that :p

Whooo! *throws confetti at the screen* I'm kinda happy that they finally connected and she opened up, but I'm sad cause it ended. :( but nevertheless, good story! I loved it.

That was an unexpected ending, but I liked it. And I just knew you'd end up throwing the title in there somewhere.... I loved this story from beginning to end.

This was brilliant :)
You're such a brilliant, creative and amazing writer! I need to read more of your stories. :D

Oh wow another story finished! Brilliant!

This was such an amazing story from start to finish! I'm so happy I've tagged along for the ride of it :)

This was beautiful, full of mixed emotions from the start, I really enjoyed it.

Kari finally told Matt about why she hasn't sung ever since she got, that she was tortured and she lost the baby.
And they were finally able to get intimate with each other after she was able to put her past behind her and let go.
Aw Matt knows how to swoon Kari all over again, with just a few words of love and affection.
So they are going to have more children, like Matt said they better get a move on it!
Now Zacky and Whitney have finally tied the know and are now happily married.
Matt and Kari both rent through alot but they stayed stronger and lived each day for a better day!
This one hell of a story and I am happy that is ended happy for everyone!
I can't wait for your new stories!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Im glad that she was able to open up to matt. Amazing story :)

I'm sad to see it end so quickly, but it's a perfect ending.
I'm so glad to see her be able to open up about what happened.

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! Yay!

You missed the "birth" in the first sentence!(:

aw what a sweet ending to this chapter. u have been on a roll with the updates lady! makes me so happy :)

There's still so much mystery about Kari. But for me, that's a good thing =P Eli and Penny!!!! =D

It still says 'birth' instead of 'death' at the top. I don't know if you just haven't fixed it or if that was the original problem.... Anyways, I'm happy she's moving on.

I love this story to bits. It's just incredible babe!

I liked this update. Um, just to point something out I think you meant death certificate and not birth certificate. Not sure if anyone else caught that or not, but it kind of confused me as to why she would be burning her birth certificate if she was still alive. Now, the death certificate would make more sense. Just thought I'd kindly point that out. Anyways, loved the update and I'm looking forward to more very soon.

YAY they finally burnt the death certificate!
Awwww Kari inviting Eli along, and he made some new friends too!
Man Kari has one big family!
But I am sure that her whole are happy that she is alive and slowly getting better.
And it'll take some time but will open up to Matt and tell him about her time there and losing her baby.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!