Danger Line - Comments

Hm, usually after a death it only takes a little less than a week to get the funeral going, but it's probably different circumstances considering it was from war and they have to fly the body by plane and whatnot. I loved the update, I'm glad you're taking your time. Rushing always causes trouble and possible re-writes with authors. Please update, but take your time(:

Great story. You had me in tears. I can't wait to read more.

Im seriously in pieces right now. This story is really heavy for me but i can't help but read it. I can relate to it in a way. Can't wait to see what you do with this.

Damn, I feel so sorry for Matt and Damein. :(
I loved the first two chapters. I cant wait for more!

:(
I was crying at the end of this

Wow Matt is really taking it hard isn't he.
So she really was claimed decease huh, and only 10 days only went by?
But did she really die because I feel like she might be still alive.
UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD

:,( poor matt!!!!!! I'm so glad u turned this in to a story!!!!!!!I have a feelingthis is going to be great!!

I already know that I'm going to love this story. Great update. Loved the first chapter and the second chapter. Really looking forward to more chapters soon or whenever you get them out!!

I read this a while back, but I wanted to say that I can't wait till this turns into a story(:

O_O
GAH.

I was all like "YES. SHE GETS TO GO HOME!"
And I kept reading and I just stared before I felt like my heart shatter and my eyes begin to water.

It was so good. I loved it. As sad as it was, I freakin' loved it. :'3

YOu MAde me CRY! T-T But that was a VERY good Story

Wow just when she was going to go back to her family, the camp ends up getting attacked.
I feel so sad for Damein and Matt, they lose both lose someone very important including an unborn child.
I love this oneshot!
At least she got reunited with her older brother.
Hey you should defiantly make a sequel from Matt's POV when the attack happen and what happen after wards.
PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD

:'''(

Ohy god this made me cry!!!!:,( it was soooo sad!!!!!!

That was so sad it was unbelievable, you should so do a sequel about Matt and Damien's future's or something :)

Really good, loved it
: D

It made me cry at the end. I feel bad for Matt and Damien. But good one shot, I love it.

That was... so SAD!!!! T^T
But hey, that's what makes a good story. x)