365 Days To Live - Comments

Hi.
This is so sad but I can't stop reading it.
I wanna hug Jack so bad.

There are a few chapters where Rian name is either spelled Ryan or Rain.
I really hope you continue writing this since I just found it.

endnajfb AWWWW
that was so sweet
hehe you shudder been like "I was jealous cause he had big eyebrows, and they were competing with my big eyebrows." xD
lol but nonetheless
it was absolutely perfect
can't wait for more!!

It was good. It really was (:

I really like these kind of stories, and I think there is a lot you could do with this.Your paragraphs are all of almost equal lengths, not that this is a terribly important feature but it does give your story a very nice look. I love your layout too :3

Also your writing is very beautiful, I love how you word things and I'm really interested in how you progress with this, I'm definitely subbing :)

Awww. That's so cute. (:

This. Was sooo cutteee <333

Aww ! I'm glad their not fighting anymore :)

Paige claim !

Awww.
Are they gunna talk about what happened or what ?

Aww. Poor Jack.
Sky divin. I wanna do that before I die

This is good.
But their are a few grammer and spelling mistakes that are bugging me.
Wont - want
Feel - fell
And please use commas and proof read before posting. And in the last chapters, you should have used anger not angry
But please, keep this story up cuz I love and I can't believe Alex broke up with Jack.

I absolutely love this story! I've been subscribed to it, but I haven't had any time to read it.. I really love this. I'm going to admit that it did make me cry at some spots, but that's because it's sad and I love these guys, and you do a really good job on this story.. (: There were a couple of mistakes, but other than that it was amazing. (: <3 <3

This is so sad. :(

but I really like what i've read so far.
I like how alex is actually sweet in this. most of these that I read he's a cocky ass. haha.
im subbing! and reading the rest!

I've read stuff on people having three months, six months and even just a few weeks to live but never have I read anything about someone having just a year left.

Even if I have to say so myself, I thought this was pretty cool. You're good with the details, and intergrated the emotion in so well. There's a certain sense of obvious foreboding with the story considering that you've already told the reader how Jack has only a year to live and yet, through the chapters, Jack's own view on life hasn't been turned so completely, well, for the lack of a better word, twisted.

I'm not a big fan of the pink background though, although I think that might just be because I'm not a big fan of pink the color. Your banner was nice though; simple and yet it seemed to summarize the entire theme of the story perfectly. You're a good writer and despite a few off kilter grammatical errors (which I'm sure were just typos and nothing more!), this story was great.

Keep up the good work!

chapter 4:
alex's P.O.V <3 yay!
aww alex is all sad :( i mean thats obvious he would be;
but i would be a mess if i actually saw him cry
look at Zack being all helpful and sweet :)
but where is Rian? I haven't heard him mentioned much..
agreed with alex; i freaking hate the shit out of hospitals too
its always so despressing and you're there for a bad reason
there is nothing happy about a hospital
he has cancer; its official :( gosh thats so terrible
thank goodness this isn't real because id be bawling right now
what he said about the surgery; that was realy cute :)
like how hed do anything just oth ave a bit more time with him - anything
ahh this was a good chapter - well written i meant;
and it showed the emotions really well
just really sad that poor Jacko is hurt :(

First off, I love the layout. I like how the picture shows the seasons of the year. It goes very well with the story.

I like the idea of the story. And I love the fact that it's about ATL. It's been forever since I've read a story about them. I think that you could go far with this idea. So keep writing, it's great.

The only thing I noticed was a few grammar mistakes. Just reread your work before you post it an it'll be fine. And I noticed that you spelled Zack right the first time, then you switched to Zach. And Rian is spelled with an I in this case.

This is incredible so far, though. I'm glad that I read it, and I'll definitely be subscribing to this. Can't wait to see where it'll go. :) Keep up the good work!

Oh, I adore the concept of this :) And I like the way you started it out; that interactive style is great for intros in general, and this type of story in particular.
I do have to say, though, that you had some grammar mistakes, mostly words in the wrong tenses.
However, overall I liked this! Cute layout, too.

I absolutely loved this so much. It made me cry so bad. I think its wonderfully written. Great job.

It's good. I think it could use some more detail, and a better use of commas in the long sentences. Overall it's good and I really get the feeling in it. Great job.

chapter 3:
he got even more sick? aww Jack :(
if this ever really happened, I'd bawl my eyes out
it's sweet that alex is being so worried <3
aww how he explained the moment when Alex began to sing :)
ahh he's so sick, that dizzy is just not good
i love how Jack always has this positive attitude all the time
oh no, he passed out, oh jeez, no no no jacko!
gosh not a good ending to this chapter D: I hope jack gets better soon!
but because of the title of the story, I don't think that's going ot happen :(
great job though :)