365 Days To Live - Comments

aww
it's sad
I know I wud probably break down crying if something linethe happened to one of the guys
once again
I love your story
it's amazing
it's really sad
and I love how you capture the essence of the characters' feelings
I can't wait for more
update soon please

this story is soo sad
but soo good
I can already tell I'm going to cry

this story is very sweet
I love the plot
and I can't wait for more
ease don't stop this
it's such an amazing story
update soon please

i like it, keep going (: & you should most definitely be one of those people who updates quickly.
it will make me & so many other people very happy xP
so update! :D

This is really goos so far, it catches the readers attention :)

Not trying to be rude, but right off the bat I realized I am not fond of the layout. :L
It's too dark for my tastes and because it's so dark, it's kind of hard for me to read. ): </3

your never promise tomorrow
^ should be something like, "You're never promised tommorow."

There are a few other noticable grammar mistakes, but this is the only one that really caught my attention. Don't forget to check up on that, kay? :)

Now for the fun part.<3 I get to smother your story with loving words of how amazingly touching this it. :)

I really enjoyed how you gave some insight into her character; how she took all those nicely detailed simple (yet larger than life treasures) for granted and now she was losing them all. For some reason, even though you say this story won't have a happy ending, I find myself expecting one.<3 Maybe I'm just that optimistic, heehee? (:

But back to the point, your detail is very nice and even though it's a touch cliche to me, the idea is a very nice and structured one. :) The title completely fits the plot (or idea) and it's a nice touch how the two sync up like that.

Lovely Job. :)
<3

I might just come back and read more, teehee. (:

This was interesting. I enjoyed reading this for the most part. The layout is really dark but that doesn't really matter. Good job.

This is really interesting. I like your writing technique and the actual plot. Please continue. (:

heyy i like this beginning...i have no suggestions but inspiration comes from everywhere. just watch and keep youre eyes peeled. the ideas will come! cant wait for more.