SHYNE - Comments

So I have been subscribed to this story for for a long time now (like months) and I never took the time to read it, because I was overwhelmed by all the chapters. But just yesterday, or maybe the day before I sat down and started and I just finished chapter 79. You are Brilliant! I love, love this story! Your characters are written perfectly. I'm so upset that I didn't start this sooner, but I'm happy I finally read. Seriously, this is some good stuff. Thank you for this piece of art and I can't wait for the next update! :)

love you

Chapters 61 - 77: Oh my God, I could kill Yuri for calling her fat! That's just unjust and cruel and why is he doing this to her? Ugh, and at least Cole's trying to step in (failing, but trying). I am so in love with story and I will be sad when it's over. What? 23 more chapters! That makes me utterly broken hearted! Perhaps a sequel of some sort? Seriously this is amazing, oh my god.

Chapters 46 - 60: I don't have much to say other than that I love this story, Yuri's a great father. Cole is a great friend, the kids are humorous and adorable! I love it!

Chapters 31 - 45: As per usual, I'm still utterly in love. I really have nothing to criticize and the only thing I'm confused on is if Ivan is Katie and Yuri's kid? i assume not. I really do love this story!

Chapters 16 - 30: Things are making a lot more sense and I have to say that I am very pleased to have read this story. It's adorable at some parts, sad at others, and all around perfect. Your short chapters make for easy reading and it's just great. I'm falling in love with this, seriously.

I also have two favorite chapters. I can't recall the first one but chapter 30 is the second. My Neighbor Totoro is one of my favorite films and this was just too cute!

Chapters 1 - 15: So I've finally gotten to reading this and I have to say that I really do like it so far. Despite that it is a fan-fiction, it can be followed without really any prior knowledge of the Russian beauty featured in this story. I'm slightly confused here and there but as the story plays out, I'm figuring it out more and more.

Like for instance, it seems to just jump around with no particular coherent timeline (which I love). Also, so Felix is her brother (and has amputated arm and leg? That's sad but also unique), Cole Mohr (another model) is Yuir's best friend but is in love with Katie. Dylan and Heather are Yuri and Katie's children...but Ivan also is? i'm not sure on that. I'll keep reading and find out!

I love this story so much!

i have chosen to review this story for the mibba magazine. Usually my protocol for my own personal beliefs is to leave a comment on every chapter, usually in couplings of five. However, even despite the short length, I fear that I will not be doing that this time, okay? Sorry. But I will comment when I feel the need and at the very end. :) It looks very promising!

yuri katie hannah i am heartbroken

congratulations on getting into uni!! (and great chapter)

chapter 74 is one of my favourites for a few reasons

-the image of cole "parading around the room with the MMXI I drew on him in lipstick"
-the words "and I could fuck you there?" being said by yuri
-the author's note (i love you)

there are only twenty five left and i guess that's kind of a lot but still can this never end thanks

this is perfect
the whole sylvia plath thing made me askdfkslj
and everything about this story not-drabble thing is wonderful and
~sigh~
if i were you i'd update soon.
yep.

omg perfect

omg perfect

why are you such a good writer come on this is perfect and i never want it to end

why are you such a good writer come on this is perfect and i never want it to end

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everything about this is completely perfect hannah!

i love how you did this holy fuck "He paused, chewing his lip and typed "dogging" in big capital letters." perfect and also i'm sad because even though there's still about thirty chapters left i feel like these are going to go by really quickly and also lately i've been thinking about doing a kind of writing prompt like this and making each one a hundred letters, and even if this wasnt a sexy graphic chapter (i think i'm glad it wasnt) i was great and i cant wait for the next one

forced feminisation man ahaha go for it
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