Tabby - Comments

whenever you update this, whenever that may be, please know that you are a really skilled writer and i'm hooked and will totally be a dedicated reader to this story i love your characters please come back to this story<3

I read up to chapter four but just can't seem to finish it. You're a great writer, the way you describe things makes it easy for me to imagine exactly what is going on and that's awesome but I can't get attached to the characters. I'm not sure why, I guess they're just not the type of characters I'm typically into. That being said, the layout is nice and not distracting. Keep writing! :D

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Aha this is great. I actually really like it. It was kind of longer than I expected for a comment swap, but I actually did end up sitting here and reading through it no problem, so kudos to you because I usually have the attention span of a goldfish. Keep it up.

Oh sweet niblets. You can't leave us hanging like that. I need to know more about them. Oh.

I started reading this and i immediately loved it!
the storyline is relatable and i love the characters :)
please update soon

I'm not finished this yet, but I will FINISH READING THIS. EVEN IF MY LIFE'S ON THE LINE. Lol, anyway, I just subscribed.

I like this story:)

I feel bad saying this but I actually forgot about Mibba, again... oooooo!!! MORE LANCE! She is falling harder then ever! He seems like such a good kid in this chapter yet, he isn't... will he change all his ways for her? So when is the next update? lol Thanks for this update! :)

lala

I am becoming addicted to this story.

"I was never the gorgeous whore."

the gorgeous whore

GORGEOUS WHORE

brb dying.

although all of the local whores here (i was going to say 'my local whores' but i haven't been updated to p-i-m-p yet) are raggedy asses. /:

hi(:
would you like to update please?
I re-read this after being subscribed because I was going through my subs. list & I still love it!

I want to start off by saying that the layout's colors and patterns go well together; very pretty and easy on the eyes, not distracting.

The summary was enthralling for me to read. The lines ran together smoothly, and it was all crisp and descriptive. There was only one thing that bugged me: 'The emotional scarring, the mental bruises, the words...I could cover them up', I thought that there should be a space after words, but you should leave it like that if that's how you want it too look. I believe that sometimes it's okay to make grammatical errors on purpose, if you like the way it looks and all, you know.

''it was their nature to critique everyone around them so ruthlessly, but every once in a while, it stung.'

I really love that line from the first paragraph of the first chapter.

So, I just finished reading the remainder of chapter 1, and I loved it. I loved how you described her brother, her [non-exsistance] relationship with her parents, and her love/passion for dancing. I didn't find any mistakes, but I have to say that I'm looking forward to catching up with the chapters. I subscribed.

Summary: Beautifully written, to the point but dosent give away much.

Chapter one: I love the way you started out with this one and how you potray her mind talking and the way you potray her personailty.

In the secound chapter I liked how Tabitha was trying to help the kid but really made it worse for her to try and fit in.

I love the layout, it is beautifully done, you write amazingly, and the way you describe things in such ways is well amazing also. good work, I'll keep reading now :)

updaaaate!

I just finished the first chapter, and while I will read the rest, I had to comment here.

This beginning is simply perfect. The phrasing, the situation she's in, and the way she tells her story. Her story is one that anyone can relate to on some level, and it was very well done.

Also, my favorite part: puberty kicked in, and I was kicked out. That phrasing was perfect, and I giggled a bit at it. Wonderful job, I'm looking forward to the rest of it.

Girl, I wish I had more time so I could read this all in one sitting! :D You are amazing<3 keep up the updates, the details and flow of this story stun me :)

When I recieved the updates for Tabby, I blanked. I completely forgot what the story was about. And then I re-read it and fell in love again. 8D God, Lance is just so... tempting and sexy. The writing is pretty fucking awesome. Perfect amount of detail; not too much or too little. The build up of what is going to happen is so exciting. The pace of the story is also aces! I WANT MORE. :D Hope that doesn´t sound to demanding... lol. But seriously! Can we be expecting more regular updates? c; Please say yes. ^^

That banner doesn't really fit the story that much. I mean, she's more of a loner, right? So it doesn't really match up. I just thought I'd say that.

Tabby acts like I do when I think a guy likes me, even when I'm wrong. I'll start over-imagining things, over-analyze everything he does. It's nice to read a story that thinks almost the same way I do. I even try to give myself reasons not to like the guy, but I fail miserably also. XD Update soon?

Soo excited you updated!! Can't wait to see what happens next. Please update again soon?!

update! I know you haven't in while but it's so good!