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  • voidoids

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    OH YES, IT'S BACK!!!!!
    I love the new layout, and more Lance, hmm? Haha.
    July 18th, 2011 at 05:26am
  • WelcomeToMyWorld

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    Please come back to this! It's so original and I really like it! Don't give up!
    July 18th, 2011 at 01:02am
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    OMG! Finally woman! Haha, yeah how come did he suddenly take an interest? I mean seriously sometimes its for good things and others not. :)
    July 18th, 2011 at 12:41am
  • lala1234142

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    It is quite slow but I feel as if you are building up to something. I do enjoy your writing a lot! I also hope you finally found your inspiration! That is always hard to find and once you have it in your hand, it sometimes has a tendency to fly away again.... But when it comes back, usually the idea is better then before :) Good luck on your writing and I hope you continue!!!
    July 18th, 2011 at 12:31am
  • Wanderlust.

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    Hmm interesting chapter.
    Seems like Tabby & i are on the same page of why he took an interest to her so suddenly
    July 18th, 2011 at 12:29am
  • Teddi Manni

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    I admit the layout is absolutely gorgeous, but I feel that the beginning could have used lessdescription on the main character. What makes a character grow is not everything thy say but some of their actions too. I didn't get too many action from the first chapter but I understand that that's the way you want the story.

    I thought that the detail was great and the sentences weren't choppy. I also love how she is quite blunt. She doesn't beat around the bush (or at least, that was how I read it). It's a new character that will grow well. I'm definitly going to come back to this story after I'm no longer busy :)

    Honestly, I'm quite jealous of your writing :)
    July 17th, 2011 at 11:31pm
  • Amphibole

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    I love this story, I just read from the beginning to the newest update. The pacing is fantastic because there is nothing really climatic happening but still as a reader I am so invested in the story. You make Tabitha into such an everyman, "real", relatable character. She's fantastic and so human it's almost frightening. Plus the scenarios that you write aren't unbelievable and your characters all have realistic names hahaha. I feel like I know a Corey Brummer. His friends come to life in people I know from High School. I've never experienced this before in reading. It's fantastic. You're fantastic. Thank you.
    July 17th, 2011 at 09:23pm
  • Wanderlust.

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    lol love the Mean GIrls reference
    i love that she grew a pair in this chapter
    why was he so mad she was talking to Lance? did Lance say anything about her? hmm....
    July 9th, 2011 at 03:47am
  • Wanderlust.

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    about to start on chapter 4 & i love the concept of the story
    definitely new & fresh :)
    July 9th, 2011 at 03:21am
  • thedarksnowqueen

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    I just started reading this story the other week and I've finally had the time to catch up! I love your writing skills and how you don't rush into everything like most people. It's nice. And what's up with this whole BLUE WAFFLE person? Didn't they do this to Ripping Butterfly Wings also?

    Glen Coco. Love it! Everyone likes a nice Mean Girls reference.
    January 28th, 2011 at 12:59am
  • BLUE WAFFLE

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    YOUR HAIR LOOKS LIKE PUBES.
    January 13th, 2011 at 02:48am
  • BLUE WAFFLE

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    YOUR HAIR LOOKS LIKE PUBES.
    January 13th, 2011 at 02:48am
  • BLUE WAFFLE

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    YOUR HAIR LOOKS LIKE PUBES.
    January 13th, 2011 at 02:48am
  • BLUE WAFFLE

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    January 13th, 2011 at 02:48am
  • BLUE WAFFLE

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    January 13th, 2011 at 02:48am
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    January 13th, 2011 at 02:48am
  • BLUE WAFFLE

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    January 13th, 2011 at 02:48am
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    January 13th, 2011 at 02:48am
  • BLUE WAFFLE

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    January 13th, 2011 at 02:48am
  • BLUE WAFFLE

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