Hmm I wonder is Shadows is like her soul mate or something like that.... It would make an interesting twist "Hey you know that guy you've hated with a passion for all those years? Yeah he's the one you're gonna be spending the rest of eternity with YAY!!" But I don't know whatever happens its still an awesome story! xXx
"Curious my ass. You like her, you really like her, you want to hug her, you want to kiss her, you want to looooove her…" whoever that is is funny as hell lol
its true though Brian totally likes Daisy lol there is definitly more to her story though i wonder why she ran away anyway...
well ill be damned! Twyla actually cooperated with Matt but hey you can only say "no" so much until you give into him...that man is too sexy lol (that was one damn fine picture lol)
i wonder how its gonna work out with Twyla staying at Matt's....that is gonna be so good lol
LOL 'I want one'. I was expecting something like merch. Or a slice of cake. But hey- I want one too. :} Okay. I LOVE THIS RANDOM NARRATOR. He/she/it is amusing. And not taking pity on Twyla. Who needs to take a damn Cymbalta and go to bed.
This is a sad chapter. It's going to be sad to see Daisy leave. I swear, I think you are the best writer on Mibba. Thank you for making my day by updating :)
Chapter 8: Matt is such a dick! Twyla didn't ask for Lark to take care of here! And he needs to be a little more symapathetic towards Twyla, she's now stuck in the dark and he's acting like that? Not cool! Update soon<333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333
Right. Twyla = moody biaatchhh. Lark = the cutest thing ever. Daisy = Gates' future wife. Shadows is my favourite right now, I think. Though that might be because Twyla's damn pity party is raining on my parade of warm milk and soft pants. I need her too stop being such a biiiatttch before you kill someone off again. YOUR WORK IS LIKE SHAKESPEARE I DO NOT KNOW WHAT WILL HAPPEN BUT THE DRAMA IS JUST SO MUCH IT MAKES ME WANT TO DIE WHEN THE CHAPTER IS OVER. I read all these updates late at night btw. So if my comments are stupid and weird, it's 'cause I'm full of warm milk.
I am so pissed off right now Not because of this story But because of this chapter I feel her anger This chapter was very good but I really wish I had some clue as to what the fuck was going on
awww she went blind!!! how sad! hmmm so we know matt is gonna 'kill' her but i still want them to be together!!! team matt! ;) im glad briana and daisy talked! xD
Highly doubtful, take a look at yourself, stud. Bahahaha, Matt is so full of himself. I guess he's got a right to be ;) Anywhoo, I love Johnny as a bad boy! You don't really see it all that often, so I think it's a pretty sick addition to the uniqueness of this story. And Zack just makes my heart melt. I could totally see him as a dad acting just like he does to Lark.