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What's going on with Twyla?
Is her head hurting because of her eyesight going bad?
I glad that Shadows' heart "turns to mush" because of Lark- its so adorable how all of the guys act around her. But, I feel so bad for Twyla. It seems like she is getting the short end of the stick.

But, as the narrator- I think its Lark... Maybe? lol

oh snap...... love this story seriously.

I just read what you have and I love it and can't wait for more

New Reader.... I freaking love it!

Good story, a bit differemt from the other stories. Your characters seem each to have thier own personalities, I like them all. But Daisy honestly to me seems a bit sterotypical. But a great story none the less. It it quite adictive, when I left the computer after reading your 7th chapter all I could think about is, wondering what is happening after you left us with they insane cliff hanger.

i said it before and ill say it again
Lark is freakin adorable! =)

i love how Twyla and Lark interact
its really sweet =)

haha Matt that big lug
always tryig to be a hard ass lol

oh yea Brian and Daisy are so going to get together lol

damn i wonder whats going on with Twyla
and what she needs Matt for...

awesome update! =)

EUGH YOUR CLIFFHANGERS KILL ME.
I don't even think you understand- I die on the inside when a chapter ends, it's just that good.
I wanna know wtf is up with Twyla, and how V and Shadows know it's gonna happen.
I'm just gonna take a random wild guess as to who is doing the creepy anon narration.
I think it's....the head of vampires in all the land.
Or the Devil.
...
Yeah.

oh my lord!!
so what does she need matt for!?!? i want them to end up together ;) hahha
awwww i wanna aknow whos telling the story!!!

this blasted cliff hanger! what the hell does she need matt for? AGBALBOGB.
i bet all my speculations will be wrong so i'll just stew until you update again :)

I actually want Matt and her to make up because he's such a sweet character and they could both look after Lark almost perfectly. I know it probably wont happen but still.
xXx

I think the pain is daisy.... I mean like stated before twyla would let gates kno

Brian's a dick
he ought to be ashamed of himself for
making Daisy change her ways.

i feel bad for Daisy =(

Twyla is kinda pissing me off too.
my spidey senses are tingling and im
sensing jealously perhaps? lol

it was sweet of Matt to think of Twyla when
they went for ice cream =)
she should be kissing his ass right now

Zacky being the boss = SEXXXY! lol
that man is starting to beat out Brian and Matt
lately in my book lol

and Johnny...LOL!
i dont know what to say about that
man right now but DAMN!
and i say that in the positive way possible
he is damn fine as a bad boy ;-) lol

Lark is a little sweetheart!=)

and i still <3 Jimmy =)

awesome update!

Chapter 6: Ok I gotta admit it's weird seeing Johnny as the bad boy of the group, looks like Gates has a crush on Daisy, and idk wtf is going on with Twyla and Shadows!
Update soon<333333333333333333333333333333333333333

well that sure cleared up the confusion about Lark.
i was wondering why she's the way she is and had such a bond with Shadows

i feel kinda bad for Twyla though =(
i can understand where she coming from and
why she feels her parents left her out
i wonder what her gift will be...

Matt could cut Twyla some slack i mean she has had a lot to deal with
he doesnt need to be an ass to her all the time

and once again Daisy has rendered Brian speechless lol
it was wrong of him to tell her to change her ways imsure he would like it if someone
told him to
i have feeling that he was feeling Daisy's pain though but i could be wrong lol

awesome update! =)

I didn't see Johnny as the bad boy and awwe. Matt's being nice..why?

mmmm bad Boy Johnny sounds hot ;)
hahaha @Dame Chance I want Southern Bri babys too!! xD
awwwwww Shads got her ice cream!!

DAMN.
Bad boy Johnny is seriously hot.
I likey *suggestive eyebrow waggle*
Anyhow.
Syn is just soooo smart. It's Daisy, man! Whatever though. They're gonna end up making little southern Bri-bear babies. Might have to fight Johnny for her though, *cough cough*
Awuhh, Shads got her ice cream! Cute :P

Duh Syn! Daisy was the one hurting!
awww i feel bad that Twyla feels she wasnt important to he parents! =/
I wanna know what Vengeance was talking about!!
hmmmmmm Shadows and Twyla <3

Loved it, hun :) I can't wait to see how this all works out with Shadows and Twyla.

Ohmygodohmygodohmygod! I fucking love this! It almost made me cry! i NEVER cry! You're great at describing Twyla's frustration!