Honest in Lies - Comments

...oops....stupid laptop...But...And now I must squirm in anticipation to wait for the next update. I can't wait!
I'm in love with your style and plot lines!

Awe. I'm glad that the song was able to help =]
But, I must say that I do infact love the updates.
I was eccstatic when she 'killed' Jesse. I cried a little when Charles told his story. And now

This is the first well-written story I have read that was an original vampire fiction.
Brava(:
I seriously am outstanded <3
More soon please.
Also, I seriously feel for Charles, I wish Piera (did I spell her name right? I'm sorry if not.) would understand how much he loves her and where he was coming from </3

wait... WTF she killed jesse? seriously? some on, how bout not dead and just knocked out cold with a fairly bad concussion... welll... or there could be a dramatic score of events pop up from this to make the story even more interesting.... but it would really stink if she killed someone. oh i'm rambling
like the story

Just found this story a day or two ago, and I must say that I LOVE it! =]
It's very nice to read while listening to The Spill Canvas' song This is for Keeps.
I can't wait for the next update! =]

Yay! I'm not the only commenter. Chapter 14 = me drewling. It's so yummy. Hah! Keep up the amazing work Hun:)!

This is a great story. It's got a bit of a Sookie Stackhouse feel to it, if you know what I mean.
I'm really enjoying it so far.
Keep up the great, no, fantastic work!

I lovve ittt!!!!! Please update soon!

Hey I loved the story! I see your layoutless.... do you want me to make you a layout?

O.o good chapter:)

Maybe there shit-faces who are too lazy to comment and acknowledge a good story!!! Well, Hun I'll comment as many times as you want. I promise:p besides this story is fucking amazing!!! I love u....r writing:) hehe could u check out my storys..please just tell me why u think? That would be fantasmastical:)

i'll finish it regardless of i get comments or not c: i love this story too much to let it slip:D haha, idk why they don't comment. maybe they're shy?

Why don't people comment? If I comment like 1000000000000 times will you finish the story? Pretty please!!!!! :))))

O.o great story:)))) More pretty please and Hah! I got the first comment you are no longer a comment virgin... I popped ur cherry:)))) but it's rly a good story