June 27th, 2015 at 10:05pm
Well written, even the filler chapter. I could deal with a little less length, but it's honestly alright. Lends itself to the story in a way, and the chapters would seem incomplete without all of the descriptions.
Other than that I will say that I like your characterization and will continue to read the story as updates come due.
The length of your updates are absolutely incredible and I have to applaud you for that. Most of the time, I'm lucky if I can get out updates that are even half of that. In the first chapter, I really liked Meru's character, and the conversations between her and Dimitri. You are very good at describing things, and characterization with your characters. Nice work!