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  • Katrina72

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    In awe of your writing! Very well done...Bravo!
    April 2nd, 2015 at 08:56am
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    April 2nd, 2015 at 08:55am
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    April 2nd, 2015 at 08:55am
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    April 2nd, 2015 at 08:55am
  • pbreyoung1996

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    umm...i need more...like. asap! =) This is really good and I hope you can finish it. Even if it just one update that concludes evereything that would be great. I think this story needs resolution!
    July 21st, 2013 at 11:45pm
  • iRelles

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    Love the addition to the story!! It was very exciting seeing the email for the update.
    Signed...Patiently waiting for more.
    November 21st, 2012 at 01:55am
  • Katrina72

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    Wow! This is a perfect continue and I am glad you have returned! The argument in this chapter is so real that I felt more like a witness instead of just a reader.

    I have many favorite lines in this chapter, but the one that sticks with me is "rid myself of the act and to become as independent as an UN-emancipated minor"

    You have a remarkable mind and the words and metaphors flows perfectly...I absolutely love your work!!!!

    ~ Me :)
    November 20th, 2012 at 12:47am
  • Death_to_Roses

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    Recently discovered story and thank god i did discover it! When will Edward find out?! Apparently you don't update often and that SUCKS. I want to know moooore. Please update soon! Q.Q
    November 19th, 2012 at 10:33pm
  • Catie_Styles

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    Well, I read the first chapter and I absolutely loved it. I plan on reading the rest whenever I get the chance. I really like your writing style and I love Ace's name. Edward's character is tempting as always. Anyways, keep writing. You've got a lot of talent.
    June 13th, 2012 at 03:30am
  • Katrina72

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    I have deeply enjoyed this read....very compelling, descriptive and moving! Hurry with the continue!!!!
    May 6th, 2012 at 11:48pm
  • iRelles

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    Love the re-write!!!! Love the characters!! Love the story!!! I hope you are unblocked now.... I am so looking forward to the next chapter.
    May 4th, 2012 at 08:55pm
  • Saiyuo12

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    Great chapter.
    May 3rd, 2012 at 05:30pm
  • iRelles

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    Wonderful story! I am so glad you shared it! I can't wait for the next chaper! Hope you unblock the "serious writers block" lol
    July 18th, 2011 at 08:57am
  • Katrina Gurl

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    This is an and amazing story line!
    Each chapter seriously pops and I CANNOT wait to read more
    and I'm not just saying that cause you're my daughter...you have AMAZING
    writing skillz and I am SO proud of you....NOW GO CONTINUE THIS!!!!!
    *That was an order*
    March 27th, 2011 at 11:49pm
  • sonniesaurus

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    I love this story soo much!
    I can't wait for the next chapter!
    January 21st, 2011 at 03:33am
  • coralreefs;

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    bitchin' update.
    its getting better and better.
    please update soon, i beg.
    January 20th, 2011 at 03:21am
  • venture;;

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    Ahh I have been waiting forever for this! :) I am happy to see that you finally updated! Can't wait until the next one! That was...whew a lot.
    January 18th, 2011 at 06:38pm
  • AC13

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    forbid? i'm gonna continue to read this
    good chapter, by the way.
    January 17th, 2011 at 05:08pm
  • AC13

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    good going. :)
    i love this so far. and i enjoy the slapstick.
    keep it up.
    November 25th, 2010 at 06:07am
  • venture;;

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    I am also glad that you decided not to delete! Update soon please?! Pretty please?!
    November 17th, 2010 at 04:17am
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