Ay! Ohmygawd! What just happened? Oh noooo! Can you please update soon!? That was soooo just well wrong to leave a reader at such suspense! ;D Please update soon! I love this story! Absolutely love it! :D
Sooo who is that rapist? Will we (meaning the readers) find out more about her past and what her mother did to her? Although some of it seems sort of obvious but I would definitely like to find out more. Please update soon! ;D
Ooohhhhkay... This chapter confused me. Random character that just popped in and decides to rape and turn her? Is this away to move along the plot? But overall I believe that your story is well written and well developed for a fan-fiction. Keep up the great work! ;D
i love ur story,,this chapter was kind of crazy but your an author and if you feel like something should be added, then add it...your story only pulls me in more i have nothin bad too say,,please update soon