You're Gone - Comments

Omg' sooo good! Next chapter soooon please! ;D

i freakin looooove this story. update soon :D

PLEASE TELL ME YOU HAD OLI DUMP AMANDA
oh and theres a tristan/oliver makeup scene soon?

its getting sooo good :)

Yes, I LOVED it this way as well, but this is definitely my favorite way. Tristan showing up Oliver in the yelling department, finally. Iknow I would have been. ;)

love love love! Can't wait for the next chapter :3

oh my gosh. that chapter was jam packed full of drama! gosh, the tension between them two is so insane. so many things to say about this chapter but i dunno how to say them, im lost for words. this just keeps getting better and better. holy moly. you gotta update again soon okay cause like i wanna know how it all ends up i have nooooo idea you've got me on the edge of my seat!

Brilliant update lass!x <3

Omg when I got the email for a new chapter notification I was so unbelieveably excited and after having read it, I'm all giddy! Great chapter!

Ps: I love you :)

Lovelovelovelovelove this chapter <3 I hope Oli gets his shit together fast *nods*

Don't leave it there! Are you nutters? It's just continous drama all the time. It's crazy. You got me all excited and then just GAH! I want to strangle both of them, smack em a few times then have them sit down and write down everything to each other then burn the letters so that it's out its in the full open and it's gone.

Done with rant. Lovely update. ^_^

I love this <3 The emotion you get out of it is amazing :)
Hope you update soon.

awesome. this was a great way of getting out real emotion of how in real life people would probably react with that type of background.

Beautiful. Missed this story.

loveed the new chapter!

You seriously keep getting better and better.
It was so great to hear those two talk about the baby, even though it wasn't for long.
You just make all their conversations so real.
I feel like, although I've never been in this situation, this is how those two particular personalites would react.
I'm going to ramble for bit, but...
I feel like writers like you have to be either schizophreninc or just amazingly understanding of the human race. (As a side note, I'm going for the second one in your case.)
I feel like you've developed your charcters so well that they could be real people walking around right now.
They're just real.
They respond, emotionally, in a way that real life people would respond.
They're not some idea in your head of what people should be like.
They're what people really are like.
Alright, this is getting too long now, but...
Like, ugh. I can't even think of words for how much I love your writing anymore.

Well I'm glad Tris finally stood up to Oli! Lol maybe now Oli will be much nicer to her and realize what happened to the baby isn't all her fault. Great chapter, i'm excited to see what happens next. :)

"Sticking up for myself felt like sort of a relief, until I realized I had grown a backbone about two years too late." ---FAVORITE. Ugh I loved what you added to the end, it fit so perfectly. Seriously. And you already know how much I loved this in general. :3 can't wait for the next update! :) <3

Aw, Oli cried :( But I'm really glad that she put him in his place *nods* I hope he feels like proper shit right now. He needs to not be such a fucking dick and actually apologize to her and accept that it was just as much his fault as it was hers. Maybe in a few more chapters this will happen eh? *waggles eyebrows*

would you call me a sod if i admit that i cried a little bit?

I AM SO PROUD OF HER.

Whenever I get the notification that you updated I start yelling but it's a good yelling. Then when I finish reading a chapter I start yelling again because it's over. This is my favorite story I've read on here so far. (: