You're Gone - Comments

i have to admit, i got a little bit tore up in this chapter. i dont really know what to say. i could really feel how hurt and empty she's feeling. oliver is just making it worst though. he can't have both. and being with tris like that is gonna probably make her even worst because next time they are all hanging out he'll be wrapped up in amanda! i have noooooo idea whats going to happen but i really hope they have a happy ending or at least build up what they had before cause their story is so sad! i hope oliver comes to his senses and figures out what he really needs, i mean they were madly, crazily, deepily in love! there is no way he is not in love with her anymore. urgh, i hope you update again soon. i love this story, its so unbelievably amazing, soooooo great! one of my favourites.

I...love you. This story is absolutely amazing. I've read a few Oli fanfics in the past. But this doesn't even compare.

Oh how I love John Mayer and this story! This was a wonderful chapter! ;)
This story is really different from the others one here and it's amazing.
I love how Oliver is really vulnerable in these last couple of chapters, can't wait for the next one! Hopefully soon!

Awesome story!! :) can't wait for the next chapter.

I really liked this chapter. It's good to see them getting along. I really hope they get back together because they seem to need each other. :) Please update soon.

So before I even started reading I put on edge of desire because I remembered you told me that influenced this chapter so and fdsjkfdsjhkfsdjkhfs
GOD DAMMIT DANIELLE THIS WAS ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT FABULOUS FLAWLESS, ETC. ETC. ETC.
You have me crying by the end fljsjkhfsd UGH I LOVED ABSOLUTELY EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS. honestly. not one bad thing, nope nope nope.

UGH. I just can't get over it. This was my favorite chapter, hand down, by far, the best.

LIKE YOU. YOU'RE THE BEST. :* <3333

Ohhhhmooiiigaaawwwwddaaa.
I am in love with this story, though you've probably already heard this. ;)
I cried from chapter fifteen to twenty, literally all the way through. Honestly, the story within itself has moved me. Chapter twenty-one was the sweetest thing, also!
And my feelings about lady gaga are mutual; she's like a trashy version of madonna.
More please, missy? :D
Oh, and even though I know I'm quite late.. Richard Siken? Haah.

oh gosh, she didnt leave him. hmmm i wonder why. and oliver is a bit stupid and kinda changes his mind about tris a lot really but i like him in this chapter though! i really am so excited to know the out come of this story, i hope its a happy one because they've already had a sad on in the past! bah, okay welll update again soon :D

ohh i likeee, this is one of my fav chapters i think :D

Oh god.
That phone conversation was perfection.
Absolute perfection.
It's always refreshing to see Oliver in that very weakend, very human light.
It's good to see him struggle in a way that makes him kind, sensitive, instead of his normal angry demeanor.
Your writing never ceases to amaze me.
As a side note, can I agree with your opinion on Lady Gaga?
She annoys the hell out of me.

This was adorable! I felt all giddy inside. I hope it lasts.

Happy Valentines Day! :)

Aw, I love this story so much.

OMYGOSH.
SOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD!
update soon :D

Aww!!! I nearly squealed from the cuteness at the end! I'm so glad that they're *sort of* getting along now :)

PS- Horrible Lady Gaga is horrible.

Even though Oli and Tris have a lot of problems, I think they make a really cute couple. It's good to see he's being nicer to her. I absolutely love this story. :) Oh and btw, I don't like Gaga either.. o.o

OH MY GOD I LOVE WHAT YOU ADDED SO MUCH.
fsjfdsjhfsdjkhdf perfect perfect perfect. seriously. loved it.
:D
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Wow I can't believe she told them what happened! I'm really glad that Amanda didn't get mad at Tris, but is mad at Oli. Can't wait for next update. :)

YOU UPDATED! AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
I am so syked. This chapter was so depressing and irritating all in one. I pity Oliver really. He's got no one to blame but himself. This was absolutely amazing and I'm so proud of you through slowly getting through such an a emotionally draining time. Fabulous update lovely. Absolutely mental. I can't wait for what's next! :)

I don't even have words anymore.
I just can't fathom the right words to say about this chapter.
Although, something in your authors note caught my attention.
The bit where you say it was emotionally draining, it made me realize something.
I really admire the story your writing, and I realize how emotionally demanding it must be to do so.
It so amazing how well the characters' emotions come across.
So, I just wanted to say I really respect how much you put into this story emotionally.

oh my gosh. she finally told them the truth! oliver is going to probably kill her for doing that. oh my, so much drama! i love it. urgh this was really emotional for sure, i was like sucked in and taking it all in. each chapter gets more and more intense! i really have no idea whats going to happen in the end, i hope its more or less happy unless not, i dunno. i really am dying to know whats going to happen in the next chapter kjdsflksjfd update again soon!