hey! i'm really enjoying this story, but i think that you're spreading it out too much. the first four or five chapters should really have been kept in one, having to change chapters really disrupts your reading and the flow of the story. there are a few grammatical errors but nothing major. overall it's really good, keep up the good work!
I've never read a fan fic like this before, so I'm not really familiar with the characters, but I really enjoyed it! I thought it was very cute, and sad that Bam is marrying someone else. I think Ang is a great character, and I really like her. This story is really well-written; update soon and keep up the good work!
Heeyyy!! Thanks for leaving the comment, or i would never have known you'd updated!! whoop. Loving this atm and acn't wait for her to see Bam again. :D
I'm working on it lol. :) I was typing that up yesterday and the hubby was sitting next to me, and I think I scared the crap out of him when I randomly yelled "DRUNKEN WRITING WOOOO!" :)
Woo I officially love drunk Angie. And ville is a doll as well. Stupid bam and his asshat-ness! But on the plus side I am loving where his story is going. So glad that you got over your writers block love!!!! Now....give me more!!!! Please?