It Starts With Goodbye - Comments

  • IdiotDorkGeek

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    wow its been a while!!
    i loved the update though!!
    more soon please?
    June 22nd, 2008 at 07:50pm
  • play dead.

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    Okay. I love it :tehe:, honest.
    I've not moved since I started reading, :cute:, more please?
    - subscribes -
    May 16th, 2008 at 12:10am
  • IdiotDorkGeek

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    i loved it!

    great tattoo idea.. hopefully it'll hurt bams feelings.. :S

    more soon?
    May 10th, 2008 at 11:19am
  • MissxUnderxStood

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    :O I love it.. You should update soooooooooooon!
    February 7th, 2008 at 12:58am
  • Sailor Meranda

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    I loved it again, it was cute. Well sad.
    January 25th, 2008 at 02:15am
  • IdiotDorkGeek

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    love it!! fab update! :D

    BAMS SUCKS ;(
    January 22nd, 2008 at 07:19pm
  • Sweetest.Poison

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    woot for updates, and as i said before.
    BAM YOU IDIOT
    January 22nd, 2008 at 02:47am
  • Sweetest.Poison

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    OMG WTF
    RAWR Bam you idiot!
    I demand more.
    BTW new reader.
    January 20th, 2008 at 08:10pm
  • IdiotDorkGeek

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    *new reader*

    love it!! the story line is great! bams a idiot for kissinf Jenn :(

    more when you can!

    *subscribes*
    January 15th, 2008 at 08:33pm
  • Critical_Acclaim

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    i'm going to be updating as soon as my final exams are done. I promise!
    January 15th, 2008 at 04:37am
  • Beautifully Tainted

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    grr i never like jenn lol. and im with war_is_homo but only for jenn lol..okay i would like to 'hurt' bam a little too haha but no killing him. lol. love it and me too i want mooore <<3
    January 14th, 2008 at 02:58am
  • i_love_rolo_cookies

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    *new reader* can i kill bam? and then jenn? and then bring bam back so Angie can do whatever she wants to do to him?
    more more more *subscribes*
    January 12th, 2008 at 07:37pm
  • Sailor Meranda

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    Awh, poor girl.
    January 11th, 2008 at 11:01am
  • Sailor Meranda

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    Gruffy still improving yay! I enjoyed it again, I like how when she was chewing on the apple talking about Ville, it looks/sounds like wet willie, lol.
    January 8th, 2008 at 12:28pm
  • Write_Your_Heart_Out

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    ur very right. That Finnish part was all conjumbled, and it took me a while to get the point of it lol. And i know a lot of Finnish. Anyways. THe begging part, actually was more of you saying 'we are all beggers' lol. Which made me laugh. Good job tho
    January 8th, 2008 at 10:13am
  • Sailor Meranda

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    Its gotten a lot better. There are still a few small things wrong, but nothing you should get in trouble for. I loved it.
    January 7th, 2008 at 06:46am
  • Write_Your_Heart_Out

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    very nice darling. I am happy that i finally make a new appearance. Ah, Willa Walo, you have my heart lol. Speaking of bumming a ciggy, i must indeed go on a search to find one in my house lol
    January 7th, 2008 at 12:43am
  • foREVerJimmySullivan

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    kewl....
    update soon....
    January 5th, 2008 at 12:45pm
  • Critical_Acclaim

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    ok thanks. I was just trying to get rid of the enter parts. Now that i did that, I'm going to go back and fix that. Thanks so much for your help. I just switched over here from Quizilla.com and I'm not used to how things work here.
    January 5th, 2008 at 11:45am
  • Sailor Meranda

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    Its been fixed never mind, but just a few things to help you out? I'm not being picky, but story editors will put you on there list thing if you don't fix them. One: The title needs to be just the title, not the A Bam Margera story part. Put that in the story tags, or descriptions. Two: now that the enters are gone. Each speaking line. Not thought but spoken line is a line of its own. Thats where a enter fits in.

    I'll get you the link to something that will help you there hold on just a bit kay?
    January 5th, 2008 at 11:39am