Retrograde Lovers - Comments

I was sad at the beginning because I realized that Frankie was sick, then the middle was so good I all but forgot. That ending… so fucking sad. I'm still crying. My pillow, it's damp. All over. Why does this not have 18,000,000,647,929,482 comments? I feel the need to make even my non-MCR friends read this.

i honestly cried at the last chapter. it was so perfect.

This brought me to tears. Not many stories have ever brought me to tears but this one, this one did. This story was so heartfelt and heartbreaking but so so so beautiful at the same time. I honestly don't know you or Joey but I hope despite whatever you have been through that you are okay. <3

No piece of writing has ever single-handedly made me cry before. This brought tears to my eyes.

Thank you for such a beautiful story.

Seriously, thank you.

I feel sad, but like Gerard, I also feel happy.
Mostly because it that was so beautiful.
If that's the end, I think it ended right... and if it isn't, I'm still going to read this.
Andd.. whoever Joey is, I hope he's okay and you're okay. : ]

i think i started crying on like the third word, that was just so completely beautiful, and real.
i dont think ive ever read anything that beautiful before. god, and i cant stop crying for you and for everything.

When I read this last chepter, I didn't even picture it as a Frerard.
I didn't even think about Gerard and Frank as characters.
I thought about you, and Joey, and though I may not know or have known either of you what so ever, I can just imagine.
And thant made everything all the more real, and passionate and touching and just heartfelt.
Human. Raw.
And I loved every second of it.
Especially now, after I balled my eyes out.
Magnificant!

I got all the way to 'some days, i forget' before I started crying. and didn't stop. Because it reminded me, and I felt guilty for forgetting, even for a second. It was just really good. And the disjointed way you write is really unique too.

Oh my. I kept my self together, and then read the last two lines... and I don't wanna press that... but honestly, genuine tears.
I really don't know what else to say.
xo

I just read this, and I must say... it's amazing. It made me cry in the end, but that's a good thing :)
Beautiful work.

um well um.... let me just get this out of my system...
YOU KILLED FRANKIE!

ok much better now.
it was quite lovely except the whole dying part.

I just sorta wanna hug you know. I know my comments aren't much to others but even 1% means something to someone. Let me know if you write again like this

I... This is... I am completely speecheless right now.

It must've taken a lot of courage to write about something like this- something so deep and profound and personal you can honestly say it made an impact on who you are. And if it was easy for you to tell us this story, even through Frank and Gerard, I still give you props. I don't think I could ever be able to do that. Stories that are based on something that you have experienced always seem to be the best, in my opinion, and this is no exception.

The style you wrote this in really makes it what it is. I belive you mentioned in an AN that you wrote this the way you would tell it verbally, and that is what stuck out the most. Most wouldnt be able to pull this off- what with all the fragments and periods and such- but in this it actually all came together and worked magnificantly. You could not only get inside G's head, but it felt so tangible, so real as if I could step into his shoes and see through his eyes, live how he lived. That is truely amazing.

I have a lot going through my head about this, but I just can't get it all down in text. Just know you truely have talent if you can stir up so many emotions in the reader, which you really did. I didn't start to cry until I read those four words in your AN on the last chapter. It completed everything.

R.I.P, Joey.

A part of the comment disappeared. But it doesn't matter, because it was just me rambling about how I live this.
xoxo.

This feels so real, so... I don't know, just. It's beautiful and I feel so sad, because he's gone and I don't want him to be gone. The way this is written is just perfect, kind of. I mean, it fits so perfectly to the feel of it. Or it gives the feel to it. I don

I just love the way this is written.
It makes me want to feel things and some other stories can do that to... but it's not the same.
This one makes feeling things easier and more... genuine, I guess.
it's beautiful.

omg...idk what to think. it's amazing and i love how it's all written and how the additude is. I'm gunna miss it when it's done. :(

oh wow, so i just started reading this, and it's so beautifully heartbreaking.
I love the way it's written, it fits perfectly.
But it's so sad. They loved each other. Whenever I read stories with major charactor deaths, I always think the other person should follow them - I'm thinking the same with this one.
I really can't wait for the next chapter.

Thats really quite beautiful, and feels so real. xo

I really don't know what I can say here.
I... I really don't know what there is to say here.
But I'm crying.
I gave in, in school, and I'm crying.