Retrograde Lovers - Comments

This is beautifully written. *subscribes*
I actually kind of teared up a little...
that would have been embarrassing....

LOVE iT!!
Write more

Again, nice and true and raw and blunt.
Like, I feel like this is how I would like to be.
I'd like to say, yeah. The drugs and alcohol and shit are nice but I'm happy and alive because I've got myself and my person and we're just free. Additives are secondary.
" Free Fallin' "

hmm i really like this so far
i can already tel it's going to be sad and i like that
and the stretchy skin thing? somehow i can just picture gerard pulling at frank's stretchy skin.
update soon.
xo britt

I agree with Sweet Mary Jane.
And I don't get the Ramones reference either... Care to explain? (:
I'd love to give you this super awesome review, but for some reason both times I've read this, I decided to read it at really bad times, when I shouldn't be reading.
But next time I promise I'll say something awesome. I think. x)
xoxo.

I just. love. how you write. like this. It's pretty. fucking amazing.

XD

Seriously, your writing style is awesome. Its all disjointed and not connected- which in this case is a very good thing. I feel sorry for Frank. I didnt get the Ramones reference. How is it ironic that they like The Ramones?

I hope you update really soon :D

Beautiful.
Quite real, and alive, and sad and raw.
But beautiful.
Just real, actual, no beating around the bush teenage love.
:)

I can't wait to read this story.
Is this what you'd been telling me about months ago?
I think it might be, the way you said it's a based off of a true story.
I have a feeling I'm going to cry in the end, but I know I'll probably love it anyways.

I really like the style you're writing this in!
It seems really interesting too, the plot.
I'm subscribed. (:

hmm interesting. I seriously like how you write (: *subscribes*

Woo stole comment virginity :)

i really love the first chapter of this story, or the prologue. Its really good, who knew frankie would have stretchy skin. Haha i love!
Write more :) i adore this already