Retrograde Lovers - Comments

hi imma new reader!
and im like really upset that franks going to die, its like obvious in the most unobvious way, but the last chapter kind of told it all and im sad. but im looking forward to the rest ! :D

I feel like the "I just laughed it off line" holds way more meaning than I think it would.
But you know... that's just me reading into things too much.
I loved this chapter. I think it's my favorite so far.

i liked angry
it was just so beautiful
very deep. nice

I know I need to reply to your message, and I should before I write you a whole new comment but I can't help it! I'm sitting in school, reading this and I'm really about to cry, because I know what's about to happen and I just, gah I must look like an idiot, haha. But I feel for you and I feel for the characters and I'm just waiting for something I know the ending to and I'm just the reader, but my heart's aching for it all. I really have no fancy intellectual shpeal for you today.

That's sad...you should make a longer story like this

It's so simple. Just the way it's written when I read it, I read it in Gerard's voice. I was looking for a good story with him before I create my own, because it seems all my subscriptions are the same people. I miss MCR. I love how you put this, and the idea. I hope I see more soon.

I'm glad that this was included.
Because even though us readers got to see bad around the two,
we never really got to see the human nature within them.
We now know Gerard does get jealous, and does feel angry and tired and spent.
He know that he's only human.
And that Frank understands that.

And never ever forget.
Yeah, like my favorite Death Cab For Cutie lyrics, "..I'm thinking of what Sarah said, 'Love is watching someone dies."
I'll expect that this does already have an ending.
Thank you for sharing.

I'm going to comment again because I liked the last line.
and because you updated like... ten minutes after I read the last chapter.
Maybe even less than ten. I don't even know.

I just love this.
I love the way it's written like a conversation.
And the way the characters are their own person and yet they're the same.
I just love everything, and I want there to be more.

One word.
Amazing.

i feel like they are falling apart.
and it saddens me. deeply.

The aftermath is secondary.
Honestly, I dorked a little because it's all 'Art Is The New Weapon'
But if I didn't know a thing about My Chem then the quote fits perfectly into the situation and what the reader can guess is about to happen in the story.
And for the record, I've never had the opportunity, but it sounds so beautiful and in the moment to just be together with the person you love in a dark room at school :)

its so beautiful in a weirdly depressing way.
i love it!

Usually all I ever want to read is lovey-dovey corny-ass shit.
And usually that's all I will ever read, too.
Most times I read a story and the expression "we fucked" comes up I get a little irritated.
So I don't know why this time I have no objections what so ever.
It just fit so perfectly I guess.
I've decided my favorite description for this story is just 'Raw'.

So you know how I said I was going to write this super awesome review?
I probably never will, because then I need to go all constructive critism, and I can't do that, because I can't find anything. So I really hope you're one of those people who like stupid comments that goes on and on about how your writing is amazing. (:

I love your writing.

Preserve.
That's the best word that you could have used to describe living on.
Of course a story like this is going to be sad, and have more downs than ups.
I love it though. I mentoined it before.
It's raw and real. There isn't really a cliche that I can detect, it just feels right and natural :)

aw, i love the way you write this, cuz its purely thoughts and emotions not 'then i walked over to the door and slammed it closed. hes a douche...'...BLAH BLAH BLAH.
This is refreshing.
And frankie seems so Fucking Sweet :))
xoxo

I seriously am liking this. I really like how you write, and what your writing about. The way you word it makes it seem so realistic, like I feel I can kinda relate, which a fair amount of stories don't acomplish, so yeah, I really am loving this (: