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  • TaylorIsHere

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    John has officially stopped being an asshole. Me likey.
    Garret is adorable :D
    And June's mom FINALLY accepted that her daughter isn't a delicate little flower-like social pariah anymore..which is bloody FANTASTIC.

    Loved the last update :) And I can't wait for the next one!

    Stay Awesome.
    March 22nd, 2011 at 04:16am
  • Kinkeh Dinosaurs

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    Yes! The mom knows, and she finally accepted it.
    hkldsnfds. Prom dress shopping. xD Oh, that'll be interesting with Pat, Kennedy, Jared, and Halvo.
    Updateeee. c:
    March 22nd, 2011 at 02:54am
  • lolianedra

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    Yippe there going to prom toghether and john is fully approving of them being toghether but i still wonder whats gonna happen with her going to school anr him on tour ok yeah bye bye love your story and cant wait for an update :D
    March 21st, 2011 at 10:32pm
  • haiialiciaa

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    asdfghjkl this story is so cute. update update update
    I love itttt! :D
    March 21st, 2011 at 09:58pm
  • EC1208

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    i love this story garrett and june are sooo cute:)
    March 21st, 2011 at 09:56pm
  • nathalii47

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    xD
    March 20th, 2011 at 12:36am
  • therandaset

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    YES John's not being a douche anymore!!!
    March 18th, 2011 at 10:03pm
  • Kinkeh Dinosaurs

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    Woohoo! An update.
    Awe, John is okay with the relationship! Good.
    I hope the long distance relationship goes well. D:
    Can't wait for more! (:
    March 17th, 2011 at 12:32am
  • therandaset

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    lkjnfdjksfn I LOVE THIS STORY.
    March 13th, 2011 at 12:29am
  • Superstarrrrrxxx

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    The last chapter really fitted in your story line. Still think June shouldn't trust Darry just yet. :)
    Update soon, I'm really hooked!! :)
    March 12th, 2011 at 06:09pm
  • XOXOnyx

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    Wait is it over ):
    March 12th, 2011 at 12:44pm
  • ally...

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    Wow, that should say "Can't wait to see where you take this next". Fail.
    March 12th, 2011 at 11:19am
  • ally...

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    Interesting to find out Darry's back story, although I hate cheaters, I like the bit of explanation for her actions. I also really like that June didn't immediately forgive her. This interaction fit in well with what is happening with the story. Can't see where you take this next.
    March 12th, 2011 at 11:19am
  • draloliane

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    im glad she had a talk with darry good update :) please new one soon? :)
    March 12th, 2011 at 03:42am
  • Bubbleloveworld

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    i knew darry had a motive thanks for telling us
    March 12th, 2011 at 03:34am
  • Kinkeh Dinosaurs

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    Yes!
    I was completely stoked to see an update. (:
    I've been chomping at the bit.
    Daisy is back. o: I kinda... wish her and Jared get back together. :/
    He's so lost without her and obviously she, without him.
    But yeah.. I dunno. It'd be hard to forgive her for everything she's done. . .
    Well anyway, loved that chapter.
    Update again. Like, soon. For real. :3
    March 12th, 2011 at 02:53am
  • xnads

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    I really like the story!!!!! Update soon?like tomorrow?:p
    March 12th, 2011 at 12:44am
  • TaylorIsHere

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    I don't know if I've commented on your story before or not, I can't really remember.
    I've been reading for a while and I absolutely love it! It's awesome and I love how defined the relationships with all the characters are. Sometimes when I read stories on here all of the chemistry between the characters is screwed up, but in yours it's not and I really adore that. Like between June and all of the guys (especially Halvo, John and Garret).

    Now, going on what it says above this little comment box, I'm going to donate a little bit of constructive criticism. I usually hate criticizing anything, especially someone's writing, but my internal editor makes it hard not to point things out.

    You know the line where June is yelling at Darry about mistakes and she points out that it wasn't a "mistake" because Darry cheated on Jared intentionally and acted on purpose, well it doesn't really make sense because June is justifying how it wasn't a mistake before it was intentional, but mistakes are intentional. If Darry had called it an accident, or said she did it by accident, and June said that whole line but replaced the word "mistake" with "accident" it would make a lot more sense and sound better. I'm only telling you this because it was a really good line, and seemed important, it just didn't make a whole lot of sense.

    But it doesn't REALLY matter, because either way your story is still amazing.
    March 11th, 2011 at 11:47pm
  • here goes nothing

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    I just read all 41 chapters,
    Now please please update again.
    Xo
    March 11th, 2011 at 11:12pm
  • BeedleBard

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    One of the first stories I started reading since I joined Mibba, and I love it! :D
    March 11th, 2011 at 10:23pm