John has officially stopped being an asshole. Me likey. Garret is adorable :D And June's mom FINALLY accepted that her daughter isn't a delicate little flower-like social pariah anymore..which is bloody FANTASTIC.
Loved the last update :) And I can't wait for the next one!
Yes! The mom knows, and she finally accepted it. hkldsnfds. Prom dress shopping. xD Oh, that'll be interesting with Pat, Kennedy, Jared, and Halvo. Updateeee. c:
Yippe there going to prom toghether and john is fully approving of them being toghether but i still wonder whats gonna happen with her going to school anr him on tour ok yeah bye bye love your story and cant wait for an update :D
Interesting to find out Darry's back story, although I hate cheaters, I like the bit of explanation for her actions. I also really like that June didn't immediately forgive her. This interaction fit in well with what is happening with the story. Can't see where you take this next.
Yes! I was completely stoked to see an update. (: I've been chomping at the bit. Daisy is back. o: I kinda... wish her and Jared get back together. :/ He's so lost without her and obviously she, without him. But yeah.. I dunno. It'd be hard to forgive her for everything she's done. . . Well anyway, loved that chapter. Update again. Like, soon. For real. :3
I don't know if I've commented on your story before or not, I can't really remember. I've been reading for a while and I absolutely love it! It's awesome and I love how defined the relationships with all the characters are. Sometimes when I read stories on here all of the chemistry between the characters is screwed up, but in yours it's not and I really adore that. Like between June and all of the guys (especially Halvo, John and Garret).
Now, going on what it says above this little comment box, I'm going to donate a little bit of constructive criticism. I usually hate criticizing anything, especially someone's writing, but my internal editor makes it hard not to point things out.
You know the line where June is yelling at Darry about mistakes and she points out that it wasn't a "mistake" because Darry cheated on Jared intentionally and acted on purpose, well it doesn't really make sense because June is justifying how it wasn't a mistake before it was intentional, but mistakes are intentional. If Darry had called it an accident, or said she did it by accident, and June said that whole line but replaced the word "mistake" with "accident" it would make a lot more sense and sound better. I'm only telling you this because it was a really good line, and seemed important, it just didn't make a whole lot of sense.
But it doesn't REALLY matter, because either way your story is still amazing.
Garret is adorable :D
And June's mom FINALLY accepted that her daughter isn't a delicate little flower-like social pariah anymore..which is bloody FANTASTIC.
Loved the last update :) And I can't wait for the next one!
Stay Awesome.