This story is freakin awesome!! As June said that she couldn't live without her brother... Blah, I'm so sentimental but I actually got tears in my eyes! Their sister-brother-relationship is simply beautiful.. It's so sad that Garrett and her broke up but I guess it really is life... :)
I'm glad she took the break up so well. And that she has grown into a stronger person this year, and knows what she wants in life. Learning from this experience and such. I loved John and June's interaction in the end, how they are so close and both important in each other's lives.
This story was amazing and I'm sure the sequel will be as well. Can't wait to read it! :)
I loved this story. Everything about it was awesome. Except that one part in the last chapter where she said she has two annoying younger boyfriends. I am assuming you meant to write brothers. :P
I thoroughly enjoyed the change she went through, and I love how she and Garret split up and how she dealt with it because it was the ultimate demonstration of how much she had transformed during her time there, and contrasted completely and utterly with the image of her character given in the beginning of the story.
I love how you put the title into the text, mostly because throughout the entire story the reader forms the idea that "You're My Backbone" is coming from June to her brother, and it was a nice twist how it came from him to her. Surprising, really - but adorable.
I cannot wait to start reading Forget It All, as I surely promise I will. June is an great character and, more importantly, HAS great character and I am ecstatic to read more of her story, although the way this story ended you could have actually cut it off right there without a sequel. The artistry with which you wrote your story blew me away.
So I started reading this a while ago but I stopped. I have no idea why. But I spent an entire day reading through the entire thing again. And the ending of chapter 55 pretty much shocked me to slight tears. :( I wanted them to stay together! I'm anxious to see what happens next! And I can't wait for the sequel (:
omfg... i think im going to die!!!!! wow :( gare whyyyyyy woow... :( so um update the next chapter soon and then the sequel pleeeeease im freaking out this is the first story i have ever read on mibba.........
No! I'm so mad at Garret right now! Breaking up with her after prom, and while she's in her underwear, not cool man. And she freaking told him she loved him, I had a feeling she would, he should not have let her go after that... And I don't like the way he was pinning it all on her, if he was the one wanting to break up he should give his reasons not wanting to be with her anymore, not state why she shouldn't be with him. That will just fuck with her mind. I'm so angry at him goddammit! Can't wait for the sequel though :D
Well I just right this hole thing in less then a day, so I'm gonna say... YES YOU HAVE TO MAKE A SEQUEL. I don't even care if I'm the only one reading it.
Anyway, I think you should update really soon, along with We Can't forget Last Summer... and possibly Tell Me that You Love Me?