The Time Travel memoirs: Lost And So Alone - Comments

Iliana's a demon!! A demon!! Why is she a demon!!
I gasped when I read it and got quite a few strange looks off my mother and sister.
But she's a ... a..!!
I did not expect that
Anna xx

Hey. Just read chapters 17 and 18. I'll probably get alot more reading done other the next two weeks which is good because I can't wait to see what will happens mnext! I would say "Keep Writing" but you've finished, so oh well. I'm going to say it anyway.
Keep writing (other things) :) xx

Hey, I'm up to chapter 16, I should remember that. I like John Storm, he's cool. I'm really loving this. It's amazing! I could just kill those Demons! Talk about evil!
I really think you should get this published, the world needs to read it :D xx

Yay!! WereWolves!!! Classy. I loved the changing of the name but the originality of the silver bullets. Why did you have to snatch Iliana away? Why? Poor George. I can't wait to keep reading xx :D xx

Hey, Sorry I haven't read all this week. I've had loads of homework.. and tests. Anyway, I love it! Love it! Nice little twist in chapter 6, I knew there was something funny about that Dan. And I like the character Iliana. I think she'll be good for George.
I've read the Cirque, good isnt it? She keeps on telling me whats going to happen. Oh and she's not that depressing in real life.. just little.. strange. :D xx

Bravo James! I honestly can't believe it's over :( Very well done, you should deffinately publish!
I'm going to miss George so much. And Zack, I'm still not over him! The last line had me smiling from ear to ear. Great job!

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Just finished chapter four and I can't stop reading. I kept on making my own theory's about why your character was stuck in that particular period. But your idea is way better then any of the ones I came up with. I can't wait to keep reading and I strongly suggest you publish it.
Oh and thanks for your comments ;) xx

R.I.P this story - you've been around but for a few months. But you were the best story ever and I thank your creator for this. What a bloody story! If it doesn't get published, I'll have something to say about it! Well done, James. I'm so proud of you for this. It was an incredible story, just so damn good - not a boring chapter anywhere in sight! I geuinely loved all of it. George will be proud of you too!

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Hey, just finished reading the first chapter and it was really good. Your a very talented writer. I look forward to reading on and on and on and basically just on xx :)

Even though it was happy, it was such an emotional chapter! I loved the last line - it made me smile so widely.

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I'm so happy to have my Zach back - you have no idea! I love this story, so much.

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Their deaths were necassary lol

Oka, so I love you agin. :) But what about Storm, Sachar and Stryker? ):

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hehe, wait till the next my dear :)

I liked the encorporation of the title into the chapter. But I'm still not your biggest fan right now, even if he is alive.

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I hate you so much right now :'(

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I'm terrified for 72 now :/ I hope it's not too bad (LOL what am I saying of course I do!)

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Holy mother of God... George killed the devil.

(You will get killed at college on Monday, for killing off Stryker.)

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I damn near shat myself! I thought he'd died! :(

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Nooooooooooooo not George's hand! I loved it, love love loved it! 68 was amazing - but you need nudging for making George lose his hand ):

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