The Time Travel memoirs: Lost And So Alone - Comments

I feel so sad for Damian in some way. Beelzebob is so awful to him grr. And I love how easily Zach is adjusting to life on Earth. I'm connecting with him. And of course, I still love Lloyd! But Susie... She's a genius character! I think she's so clever, and I'm glad she popped into your head. She gives the story something else, a connection to George's past. Plus, another love interest for him hehe.

I love it!

Loz x

Ahhhh I want more! Those last five chapter were incredible! You just get better and better, James. I loved it, so much. So clever! Oh my God, I love George! I love Susie! I actuallt don't have the words to describe how much I enjoy this story. You're so good! (Helps that I'm listening to McFly :P). I love it so much! Write more of this masterpiece soon?

Loz x

Sorry I havent commented lately, been busy with my chapters and the band!

I love that Susie is in this now, I think she's really cute actually. I'm not too fond of the POV changes. I think its a little too much. But overall the past few chapters have been really good. I' on team Lloyd!

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Chapter 35 was just... amazing. I actually have no words good enough to describe it. It's fantastic. Well done, dear!

Loz x

Yey Zombi's! (Lolz WSS).

That was great, both chapter 33 and chapter 34! It's such a shame I can't read 35 here - stupid Tru-Vu. But yeah, that was a great section of the story! I love all the different parts of the story and how they are intertwined by three simple yet complex characters. You're such a good writer, Jamesie! :)

Loz x

James tsk tsk! Dont put yourself down, your stories are amazing! George is certainly moving on from Iliana I see! I loved this chapter and cant wait to find out who this girl is.

~The Real (nicer) Iliana xx

Ah yes! Little red skinned, horned Damian returns! I'm loving this James, keep up the good work and thanks again for all the mentions!

Iliana x

You killed a queen... in America... with zombies. None of it makes sense, but who cares... it's not supposed to. Brilliant thing about time travel

Fight scenes= much love from me.
Phew, that was cool. I was loving Zach and Lloyd there!
Bravo

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Well done James! I love both chapters! Zombies? I'm still iffy with that one but I'd really like to see how it turns out!

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Faiths POV was very interesting to see. Bravo, it made me think, laugh and roll on the floor at the same time. Well done. Lloyd and Zach always bring a bit of humor to your story James! I'm team Lloyd all the way!

Aaaaah amazing. This story is just what one needs when having her first half-decent Thursday in a very long time! And it keeps away the hunger pangs because I'm so deeply interested in what I'm reading. It's so damn good! I wish I wrote like you, m'dear.

This chapter was beautiful. I loved the emotion - you're so good at that. And I loved the part in Faith's point of view. I don't think I really like her much... But Zach and Lloyd are always there to add a bit of comedy. I love that your writing lurches you from one emotion to another - keeps everything rolling, and twisty, and interesting!

Love it!

Loz x

That was beautiful :( I loved it. There was so much hatred in it, so much insanity. Immensely immense, for lack of a less nonsensical phrase. I'm loving this story, James, incredible amounts. I feel special for being able to read it. :)

Loz x

Wow, that's clever! I like that you guys are the ones that busted old Fawksie. I thought that was a neat little twist! And Guy's description of the boys was great. I really loved your switch in person. I think it was really creative and shows even more talent! :)

Loz x

Bravo! Me likey this. Great use of Guy's POV! I love it James

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I'm loving this at the moment, you've deffinately made me proud. Upset that Guy Fawkes is going to be the bad guy tho :( not that I condone what he did at all, but he was fighting for what he believed in...anyway enough of my rant....play on!

Iliana x

I like the Bonfire Night reference.

Yes, I took a break from the Hells of homework to spend my last few battery percent reading your new chapter - how much do you love me right now? :P

I like this chapter. It gives a bit more shape to Zach's character, but without giving too much away. I like that he's a danger and an asset at the same time - that's gonna hopefully cause some lovely problems and twists for George.

I'm really happy with where this story's going - I hope you are too, li'l bruv!

Loz x

I'm really looking forward to seing where this little visit goes! By the way I have high expectations for this one because this is one of my favourite periods of history! Dont let me down James

Iliana x

Aw wow! This was great! I like the whole planet of sand idea. I don't know enough about Zach to get connected yet, but I hope he turns out surprising like Lloyd did. That, or a right nasty bastard. I can't wait for the next chapter - I really loved it, both chapters!

By the way, love the witty dialogue between George and Lloyd!

Loz x

Great again James, I really love Llyod right now!

Ili x