The Time Travel memoirs: Lost And So Alone - Comments

I love it James, sort of futuristic sci-fi planet meets wild west train heist. Very well done! Thanks for the mention

Thank you <bows>
Im trying my best :P

That chapter 25 was poetic, perfectly poetic. It was beautiful. More on Lloyd, please!

I loved the whole time rift thing. This story is getting so Sci-Fi now and I think it's amazing. You don't find many sci-fi's on here - it's a lot of vampire ones and love stories and depressing ones and fanfictions. You're like a breath of fresh air - I'm glad I made you sign up!

But God, I nearly cried at the Titanic's last chapter. It was so emotional, so bottom-of-the-barrel. You're really so talented, James. Really. I'm so, so, so proud of you and envious of your talent. You really do have a way with words.

Big sis lopves ya!

Loz x

Chapter 24 honestly gave me goosebumps... Amazing! I'm off to read 25 (and do my Film at the same time, that's how much I care!)

Loz x

To be honest, I love the way that sounds:
I stood and watched my world burn
:O love it

Great as usual James, I will that you've put in the earth burning!

Thanks so much for turning me into a demoness James! Really, I was way too nice. I am completely in love with this now!

The real Iliana x

P.S. I claim this page in the name of Raxacoricofalipatorius! :P

:O I did not see that coming! What a brilliant twist! You never cease to impress me, James. What an excellent chapter! Lloyd seems like such a nice guy; it's such a shame that his life turned out so wrongly that he had to turn to petty theft :( But Ileana, a demoness!? Wow! That was so clever. But poor George - I thought he was finally happy :( Emotional chapter, well done! More soon, m'dear?

Loz x

Beautiful; absolutely charming.

I'm really sorry I didn't get around to finishing it the first time around. You know what I'm like, trying to keep everyone happy at all given times. I'm such a fail like that.

But now I'm up to date again, and I've fallen in love with this story once more. The characters have so much depth; the description is constantly euphoric and just everything about the storyline gives me goosebumps. I like how you take ideas and you don't run with them until they're dead - you use ideas only until another one comes along, and you wrap it off in a neat bow and proceed onto the next. I've never read - or written - literature (yes, I said it! FU Liz B!) like this. Purely amazing. Keep writing!

Loz x

P.s. seems like you've got yourself some followers :)

Will get round to 18 tomorrow, dear... but my God did I love that! Your writing is amazing. Can't wait for more :)

Loz x

I am enjoying this (:

Is it supposed to be accurate? Because WWI was never fought on the British mainland. Other than that, I enjoyed it

Yep!!! I actually love John Storm!

Yay! Pirates, arg! I love it James. John is the best character so far!

Iliana x Thanks for the mention to ;)

OMG yay! James yet another excellent chapter and thanks much for the mention!

Iliana x

love love love loved it james, so sad about watching the werewolf die. Its always horrible in the end when you see the beast in its human form. Well done portraying the raw emotion of it, great job!

Iliana x

Hands down. the credit goes to you lauren for the word Bastardise I loove it!

Haha the AN was funny.

Great chapter! I like the description. I also like the characters too. Jacob seems like a cool fellow, and I hope you develope on the other two a bit more as well. I like the whole 'blood-thirsty werewolf' thing. Bringing back the old time wolves, before Twilight bastardised them! I just think this chapter's really clever.

Love it!

Loz x

haha! James is very glad