One Life To Live - Comments

Okay....so I have the chapter almost done & hoping to have it done by tonight.
It's super long - wasn't expecting it to span out that much, BUT it's a very important scene!
Thank you in advance for being patient - it will be worth it!
Have a great rest of the weekend!
x. Lauren

^ Hopefully today or tomorrow (:

when are you going to update again? x

I can an please update soon<3

Aww poor Melanie !!! update soon!!!!

Be prepared for Paulie's P.O.V. in the upcoming chapter, Lost!
(: Haha can we handle Paulie's side of the story? ;D
Love,
Lauren

Yes, you're updating (: thank you for taking your time off the day to write this , update soon?

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I know :( Had a ton of stuff going on, but I promise to update more consistently these next few weeks(: Thanks for the feedback!
Lauren♥

Oh Hun! You got to get back on track with this story, it's good bu you don't want me to forget about it ! I love it and Im glad I still remember it <3 update soon xx

I would like to apologize for the lack of updates in the last two weeks - I've been going through a rough time in school & having to deal with a lot of problems, but do know that if I can spare any time at all, I will be working on completing the next few chapters.
Thanks in advance for understanding,
Lauren.

I would like to apologize for the lack of updates in the last two weeks - I've been going through a rough time in school & having to deal with a lot of problems, but do know that if I can spare any time at all, I will be working on completing the next few chapters.
Thanks in advance for understanding,
Lauren.

So sorry I didn't update this weekend on Spring Break! I wrote a lot though! (: My prediction is that I am going to have it up by this next weekend! Will have the chapter, Meeting The Parents into two parts because that is a looong chapter with all the descriptions, and things going on *hint hint*, then I will have the chapter called, The Aftermath when Lance and Mel are driving home... <3 Be prepared!! Going to be a shocking few chapters ;-)
Thank you for the patience!!
Lauren xoxoxo

Uh oh...Oh, lord, I have a feeling that things are NOT going to go well at that dinner at all. :/ But Lance and Mel are adorable. :D Great update!

Great chapter! :D I like reading about them together because I think that they're cute, and I love how Lance is so protective of her, even though he used to be a player and whatever. I'm just waiting for him to tell her the truth... Can't wait for more!

deffinitely subscribing, this is some good s***. Honestly, very interesting, fresh and lots of well thought out characters. I LIKE IT =D

I decided on changing the name from "Fear", to "On The Edge" :)
Though I think Chapter 23 would be a better fitting for the name, "Fear"......
;-D

Will most likely be posting the next chapter, Fear, this weekend ;-)
Hold onto your seats! Gonna be a good one y'all ♥

Good chapter! :D Freddie's so cute... He and Bethany Lynn should get together. Hee hee. And ahhh! Now you have me waiting in anticipation for the next update!

Ah, an excellent update. And ugh...Lance better not break up with her... That would be really, really sad. :( Anxiously awaiting the next chapter!

I have fallen head over heals in LOVE with this story! and I agree with penguinATTACK your story is absolutely riviting (sp) I couldn't stop reading the chapters, as I have just recently stumbled across this story of yours, and was disapointed when the chapters ended and I now need to wait for updates from yours truley :) hopefully your life schedule will allow for you to update soon
lots of love,
Erin Gracie
p.s. congrats on actually having a story line & a good mystery you have managed to keep from mel so far :)
p.p.s don't worry, the rush of the relationship between mel & lance just added to the story