Wow. Wow, wow, wow. Your writing style is amazing first off. And then the whole story is so completely authentic. Every single character feels real. There's emotion, all of the characters have so much real emotion. Noel's thoughts are so blunt and unguarded like the mind truly is. This story is really amazing. You don't give away much in the flashbacks and it makes me crave more of the story. It's like with every chapter, there is one more question that goes with it. And when I read it I tune out everything else which is really hard to do, but you have done it. This story is raw, true, emotional, yet distant with a distint chord of sadness and yearning and want. It is so facinating and original. Crazy awesome. I'm jonsin' for more. :)
October 31st, 2010 at 04:34am