May 10th, 2011 at 08:18pm
A Little Piece of Heaven - Comments
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Awww so cute! I'm sad to see the story end but glad it was on a good note! Oh btw loved the names too!!! I look forward to reading anything else you start writing! :)May 10th, 2011 at 09:31am
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@ mistery gurl
Woo hoo!
That's awesome!
Thank you for reading!!May 10th, 2011 at 08:57am -
@ Jazz1617
:)
I thought the names were pretty cute too.
Took me forever to pick them out.
I'm happy you liked how it ended.
And appreciate all of your support for the story.
Means a lot :DMay 10th, 2011 at 08:57am -
@ HardcoreRocker_x_28
I couldn't agree with you more.
Thanks for reading and commenting!!!!! xDMay 10th, 2011 at 08:56am -
@ hachie
Yup, 16 hours!
She is most definitely a strong, strong woman.
And that saying is so so true.
It has been a long journey for her to finally get her happy ending, but I'm glad she did.
She really deserves it.
And I'm sure that Brian fully knows what he has and he won't screw it up :)
Wanted to thank you so much for always reading and commenting, your feedback has always been so awesome.
I'm happy you enjoyed the story and I'll let you know as soon as I post a new one up here :DMay 10th, 2011 at 08:55am -
aww i loved it!!!May 10th, 2011 at 06:41am
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Awww.....I absolutely loved the ending. And I thought the names for the babies were really cute. This was such an amazing story. I'm glad everything worked out in the end. <3May 10th, 2011 at 03:52am
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Awe, cute way to end it. Cute names too!! Sad it's over but glad things are good in the end.May 10th, 2011 at 02:23am
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So she had a baby girl and a baby boy! X3
Wow after 16 hours, their babies finally arrived in the world, Cee is truly a strong and kind woman!
I mean she went through the heartache that Brian caused her by whoring around with sluts, then with Michelle and forgiving him.
"It's easy to hate someone but it's hard to forgive someone."
I think that really applies to this story because Cee wanted to hate Brian for causing her so much pain after all she has given him but she could because she loved him so much and the only was to forgive and that was hard for her.
Not only once but twice.
I really love this story, I admit that I wanted to kill Brian because he almost lost Cee and the twins.
But I am happy that he realized that he is good enough for Cee because if not Cee would have left him because she forgave and gave him a second chance.
Now hopefully Brian will finally propose to Cee and they can get married and start raising their kids!
I have enjoyed this story so much, I look forward to the news you will come out with!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!May 10th, 2011 at 01:51am -
@ FallingOva123
That's actually a story I'm working on now :)
Once I get the first chapter posted let me know what you think.
Thank you for reading and commenting.
Glad you liked it xDMay 10th, 2011 at 01:28am -
Awwww the ending was sooo sweet.... It would be cool if u could write a sequel to it from the Kids point of view but other than that GREAT story!!!!!!May 10th, 2011 at 01:21am
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@ mistery gurl
I know what you mean :)May 8th, 2011 at 07:57pm -
@ Smshadows
LOL.
The baby Gates clones are coming!!!!
I'm updating tomorrow :)
Thanks for reading!!May 8th, 2011 at 07:57pm -
@ hachie
Haha I thought that would be funny!
Especially since the guys are so crazy.
I can just imagine how they would really act in that situation.
And I agree, I was gonna add a complication, but then I decided against it.
Cee and Brian have had enough problems getting to where they are, they deserve a happy ending.
Glad you enjoyed the chapter!
Gonna be updating tomorrow!!! ;DMay 8th, 2011 at 07:56pm -
@ HardcoreRocker_x_28
Beautiful babies are on the way!!!!! :DMay 8th, 2011 at 07:54pm -
she doesnt get a break :)
i hope she has them now :)May 7th, 2011 at 11:03am -
Little Synyster, guitar playin' babies are ready to be born! Loved it! Update soon! :)May 7th, 2011 at 08:55am
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OMG the last part made me laugh! X3
When they all calm down, Cee tells them that the babies are ready to come into the world!!!!
Then they start to panic all over again!!!!!!!!!!!! LOLOLOLOLOLOL
Wow I was little bit worried there, something might have gone wrong but then it's part of the labor.
Aw Brian was completely worried about Cee and their babies, but now he knows that they are okay he has nothing to worry about but to be there for her when she having the babies.
I think Cee was so adorable when she didn't want him to leave at all, she is so cute!!!!! X3
I am happy that Brian got there safely and not got into an accident while speeding there.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XDMay 7th, 2011 at 07:17am -
Here they come!!!May 7th, 2011 at 05:43am
Thank you :)
I'm happy about the way it ended as well.
Glad that you enjoyed it.
I'm sad to see it end too, but there will be more stories on the way.
xD