A Little Piece of Heaven - Comments

  • @hachie

    :D
    Your starting to get it!
    Awesome!
    I thought that would be the best way to punish him.
    To show him that Cee doesn't need him around.
    That she's strong and she has other people who love and care about her, who are there to support her through every thing.
    And she has to think about her babies, which are her number one priority.
    And Brian would be missing out on so much more than just a relationship if she chooses to leave Brian.
    Getting intense!!!!!!
    Thanks for reading!
    April 24th, 2011 at 03:11am
  • @mistery gurl

    she definitely isn't reacting the way everyone thought she would
    April 24th, 2011 at 03:09am
  • OMG I think I kinda of figure it out, about why Cee is doing that.
    Like she is making Brian realize that she could just stop fighting for him and just let him go.
    And if she did it'll be painful but she has two little ones growing inside her that could divert her attention from the pain of leaving Brian.
    I got to give it to her, what she is doing is really getting to Brian, calling him by his stage name not by his real name, giving Zacky the attention she once gave Brian and not getting affectionate with him.
    Man she is letting him know that she could move on and damn the guilt is really getting to him and Michelle.
    Is she still there or did Val kick her off the bus and told her to go home?
    So the only way that Brian could get close to Cee without her pulling away from him is when she is asleep?
    Well he does deserves after all the shit he put her through before and after she got pregnant.
    I can't wait for the next update and hope it'll be soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
    April 23rd, 2011 at 06:40pm
  • her attitude must be freaking everyone out, i kinda want to see things from zackys POV
    April 23rd, 2011 at 11:17am
  • @hachie

    I definitely agree with you!
    Thought it would be funny to add and defuse some of the tension.
    But you are very right.
    Cee's reluctance to make Michelle pay for what she did is what's eating her up inside.
    And I think that's more punishment than Cee could dish out.
    Especially since she's pregnant with twins and that's her main focus.
    As for Val, she has waaaaaaaaay more in store for those too ;)

    Thanks so much for reading and I'll try and update Friday!!
    April 20th, 2011 at 12:52am
  • @ Jazz1617

    LOL!
    That would've been crazy if she did hit her!
    But her babies are number one.
    Trying to keep the stress levels down.
    Thanks for reading!
    April 20th, 2011 at 12:49am
  • @mystery gurl

    Glad you thought it was funny!
    Thought it was pretty hilarious myself :)
    April 20th, 2011 at 12:47am
  • Man the part with the frying pan made me laugh so hard!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
    I bet that's how she is getting her revenge that way or something like that!
    I love the way Cee thinks, man she is really making those guys think until their brain is smoking isn't she.
    But I am glad that she is putting her babies first and not like she was before when she caught both Michelle and Brian in bed together.
    But I see that the way she is acting is making Michelle feel any guiltier than ever because Cee is helping Michelle nurse the bruise that Val gave her.
    What I think is that Cee is just done being jerked around, tired of the roll coaster relationship with Brian, now that she with twins and that is what she mainly focus on.
    I know that Val is not done with Brian at all or Michelle for that matter.
    She is going make them pay for hurting Cee before and now, I can't wait to see what she has in store for them both,
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
    April 19th, 2011 at 06:02pm
  • I thought she was gonna hit her with the frying pan! haha.... I gotta give Cee some credit becuase I probably would have just kicked Brian's ass by now. But then again, she has to make sure she gives birth to healthy babies. I seriously love this story. Please update soon! :)
    April 19th, 2011 at 02:15am
  • hahaha laughed at the peice with the frying pan! update soon!
    April 19th, 2011 at 01:58am
  • @ bloodravyn

    You are not the only one!
    I'm with you!
    April 18th, 2011 at 09:43pm
  • @hachie
    That is one of the reasons that she is not letting the chaos between Brian and Michelle affect her too much.
    Yeah most definitely.
    Val is NOT gonna let Brian get away with what he did to Cee.
    Not by a long shot.
    Cee's actions will be explained in time :)

    Thanks for reading!
    April 18th, 2011 at 09:43pm
  • @mistery gurl
    She's definitely upset.
    But Zacky is the closest to Cee.
    She confides in him which is why Cee chose him to come with her.
    She let him see her fragile side because she trusts him.
    Nothing happened between the two of them.
    They are like brother and sister.
    April 18th, 2011 at 09:41pm
  • i really wanna smack brian and michelle, now
    April 18th, 2011 at 05:31am
  • I think I understand why Cee isn't all on a warpath to make Brian and Michelle suffer.
    She putting that bullshit that Brian and Michelle pulled aside for now, she is making sure that she gives birth to two healthy babies.
    Though after she gives birth the twins, there will definitely be hell to pay because Cee will be emotional and coming to terms about what Brian did will make her go on a warpath.
    I am glad that Val is at least making sure that she is pissed at Brian and even showing some of Cee's anger.
    The last part made be laugh, Brian scared of Val hearing him and scared that she is going take his manhood away!
    I bet everyone is confused to why Cee is acting like nothing has happened but Val does, hopefully she can explain it to them so they could understand why Cee is acting like that.
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
    April 13th, 2011 at 08:17am
  • so what does zacky know that everyone else doesnt???
    he didnt hook up with her when they were out walking,
    coz that would explain why she isnt upset about it...
    April 13th, 2011 at 06:39am
  • Woo hoo!
    Hope you like the next chapter!
    Gonna try and get it up on Friday!
    April 5th, 2011 at 07:17am
  • I definitely have to agree with you on that.
    Cee's main focus has to be on her health and the health of her babies.
    Worrying about Brian and Michelle bullsh*t is not gonna help her in any way.

    But she won't be able to put it off for very long.
    Eventually she is going to have to deal with it, and I hope you like the way she handles.
    And I'm with you on that too.
    GO TEAM VAL!!!!!!!
    April 5th, 2011 at 07:17am
  • im loving it!
    im looking forward to see how she treats bri in the next couple of chapters thou!!
    update soon :)
    April 4th, 2011 at 06:57am
  • Wow Brian some how manage to slip behind Cee without waking her.
    He has a lot of work a head of him, if he ever wants Cee to trust him again.
    Even when Brian is asleep, he is in pain for the actions he pulled.
    Maybe he is having a nightmare about Zacky getting together with Cee and he is there for the birth of the babies!
    LOL the talk with Val made me laugh!
    So Cee took some anger management classes, when she doesn't take her anger out.
    Maybe if she wasn't so pregnant she would beat the crap out of Brian and Michelle but now she thinking about the babies.
    Well at least one person got the satisfaction out of out beating someone! X3
    Now I wonder what will happen from here on, will Cee forgive Brian and Michelle or will make them work for the trust again?
    A lot of questions, I think she should focus more on bringing her babies into the world.
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
    April 4th, 2011 at 03:45am