A Little Piece of Heaven - Comments

@ SMshadows

LOL.
See!
That's exactly how I see it!
It's hard for them to use their brains on a daily basis, add a pregnant woman to that! :)
No apologies needed.
I do the same thing haha.
I'm actually updating now :D

Men definitely don't think rationally anyway, much less when they're stressed lol LOVED the chapter! Except with the blood, that's so scary! Labor and birth are scary enough (I know from experience lol) and then complications! UGH! I had a c-section and that was sooo scary! I'm predicting c-section for Cynthia because she's having twins AND because she's most obviously having an issue! Sorry for rambling! Hope you update soon! :)

@ mistery gurl

People don't think rationally when they are under duress.
Especially men! LOL

thats not meant to happen :(
i could see jimmy driving like a mainac in the tour bus :)
shouldnt zacky ring the hospital so they know whats happening, and can be prepared

@ hachie

HAHA.
Yeah I thought that would be funny.
Reminded me of my brother, cause that's exactly how he acted when my aunt went into labor.
Hilarious to say the least LOL.

And I DEFINITELY will add in Val's threat.
Thanks so much for the suggestion! :)
I know right!
That would be a real sight to see!

Gonna have to wait till Friday for the updates!!!! :D
Thank you for reading and commenting hachie!

OMG I completely laughed my ass off at the beginning of the chapter!
I mean Jimmy and Zacky just running every where, not knowing what to take and just completely clueless to what to do!
At least they both calmed down and made sure that Cee is breathing correctly and that she is calm.
YES! You should definitely have Val threaten Brian and make it clear that she will not hesitate to castrate him if he EVER hurts Cee again!
LOL to see a tour bus pull up to the ER is probably going to freak some people out!
And see The Rev and Zacky V getting out with a woman in labor!!!!! XD
At least Brian will be there for the birth of the twins and him reading her baby book really helped because that made Cee's heart swell with happiness and love.
The thing that worried me now is the blood that is coming out, I know for sure that she'll need a C-Section because she'll have some complications if she gives birth.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

@ hachie

HAHA!!
I actually think that's exactly how I described them in the next chapter!
Jimmy and Zacky are crazy, but add a woman going into labor!
All hell broke loose!
And Brian does need to hurry.
He will drop everything once he hears.
He's gonna be excited too.
The first Avenged babies! :)

And I didn't have it in there before, but I think I'll take your suggestion and add in Val's threat to Brian.
It would be a funny little tidbit.
It's gonna be an amazing chapter.
I'll update tomorrow :)

@ mistery gurl

Yeah he needs to move his ass or he's gonna miss it!!

@ SMshadows

Awww!
Glad you enjoyed the update!
And yes!!!!!
The babies are coming!!!!!!!!
Agggh!
I'm excited too and I already know what happens! LOL

@ HardcoreRocker_x_28

They need to race there or the babies will be born on the bus!! :(

OMG I would love to see the look on both Zacky and Jimmy's face when Cee started to have contractions and then her breaks!
Man I would picture them running around like headless chickens when she said her water broke! LOL
I bet when Brian hears that Cee is in labor, he'll drop everything and go to her since now they are back together.
I am happy that she is back with Brian and that they have worked out the problems.
Maybe you should have Val threaten Brian and make sure that if he ever hurts Cee she will beat him to death with a shovel!
It's cute that she misses Brian when he is only away for a few hours.
But at least she has two people to keep her company when she is alone.
I know for sure that her babies are going to adore and love Cee unconditionally since they seem to react each time she talks to them.
YAY the babies are going to here and I can't wait for the next update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

hahaha the ending!!! i loved it!!
man brians gonna freak coz they are ealy, but its normal for twins :)

OMG isn't it too soon for the babies to come?! I was so excited to see you had updated, I absolutely love this story! Please update again soon! ;)

LOL They need to get back quick or they're going to miss something!! LOL

@Jazz1617

Yay!
I'm happy they worked it out too.
And trust me, he's got his head screwed on right this time.
Thank you so much for reading :D

I'm glad they've worked it out. But Brian better not mess things up again! haha

Great chapter. Can't wait for the next one! :)

@mistery gurl

The things we do for love.....
At least they got everything worked out and they are on their way to a better life together.
I think that's what counts more than anything.

@hachie

So you liked the way it turned out?! :D
So glad to hear.
I was trying to build up to this chapter where all the cards got laid out on the table.
Glad you liked the outcome.
And you are so right.
Cee isn't the same woman she was before.
She's not gonna deal with Brian's bullshit or him mistreating her.
And he'll lose so much more than just Cee if he screws up again.
Cause she will not hesitate to leave if she thinks its what's best for her babies.
And it really was a slap to the face for Brian.
It was a HUUUUUGE wake up call, and one that was long over due.
Now he knows that Cee doesn't need him.
She has a whole family of friends that have her back no matter what.
And they've proven that time and time again.
I think he learned his lesson.
But you never know with Brian.
He's just a little bit stubborn LOL.
And you betcha it was mind blowing!
All that tension building up over a couple of weeks!
Explosive is more like it ;D
And yeah, she not only ignored him because she knew she would go crazy on him, but because she wanted to let teach him a lesson, and let him know that just because he fucked up and said sorry, doesn't mean things are gonna go back to the way they were.
And that's exactly what he needed!

Thank you so much for reading!
So happy to hear you liked the way this chapter came out! :D

she shouldnt feel bad for saying shit to brian, hes the one that cheated on her, told her he was sorry and then did it all again.

Wow Cee really made Brian realize alot things and opened his eyes even more!
I am so proud of her!
Before she was a very timid girl that would forgive Brian from all his mistreatments toward her because she loved him so damn much and then seeing him in bed with Michelle really pushed her over the edge.
And now she is a strong woman that has gotten through so much from Brian past actions that put her heart in the wringer and now she is putting her foot down.
She is not going to take anymore shit from him and what she did for the past week proved to Brian that she can leave him because she has so many people looking after her.
And her babies are the number one focus now and if Brian is going to be messing things up, she is just going stop trying and leave his ass.
I bet the sex was mind blowing because all that tension around them made things even pleasurable for them and that Cee has some raging hormones from the pregnancy.
I really sincerely hope this slaps Brian in face and make me realize another fuck up, he will lose Cee and his babies, she won't tolerate him any longer.
So that is why she was avoiding him is because when she talks to him or look closely at him, she'll get really worked up really bad.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD