Burned - Comments

Hey there dear.
I realize it's been forever since I've read this and since you updated as well. I wanted to drop in and say that I really wish you could get this story back up and running.
I'm sure life has been having it's way with you and that might be why you fell away from this, but I do wish you could return and give us more. I really am a sucker for a good johnny story-he doesn't get enough love damn it!- and this was shaping up to be really something special.

So all in all, I still love this story, I hope life has been treating you well, If ever you need a shoulder to lean on, or even just an ear to talk to, I may be only an internet person, but I'm here :)

I really love this! Annabelle is a really well developed character, but you might want to work on developing her relationships with the other characters, should you ever go back and rewrite it. It just comes off as kind of sudden that she is best friends with Johnny when they didn't have a ton of friend-bonding-interaction time. With some of the relationships, it is fine; take Justin for example. The point is she doesn't really know him. But with Johnny, and even with Matt, it just moved too fast, without that stepping stone. Her relationship with Violet was good though, you took time to build that, and it comes through really nicely. I adore Annabelle as a character, and her storyline is really strong. Just take some time to develop the relationships, and this story will be golden.

Love it, Annabelle should have told them about the ex girlfriend working at the restaurant thing becuz it will show what kind of guy he is, so yea can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

I love this story!! I agree with the others below! Justin is nothing but trouble!!! Keep updating!!! I can't wait to read more!!! :)

Yay! Everything was finally sorted on my end and I got to read this and and and yay!!

Okay, first, I still don't like Justin. not one bit. She was clearly freaked out on the bike and he just continued to speed and do things that made her nervous. Kidding or not, it wasn't okay. Also, his story at the restaurant, don't believe that either. Something is fishy about that boy and she needs to get away from him. Especially because ALL OF THE SIGNS point to her being in love with Johnny.

At any rate, I loved the update and can't wait for the next one. Which, by the Author's Note is... TOMORROW!! *dances* Wonderful job, mei mei.

Love this story, I like Johnny, Justin isn't the one for her it seems tht he has anger issues, I think the creepy guy tht keeps calling Annabelle's is tht idiot Josh or whatever tht jock's name is and yea.....I think tht she shouldn't go back on a date with Justin after the first one he gives me the hibbie jibbies, i really think tht Annabelle loves Johnny but doesnt kno it yet, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

8subscribes*
love this so far!

UPDATE! NOW! I DEMAND IT! :D

You have a loy of miss placed words in the story. But the plot is interesting an I'm a little exited to see was happens next. Please update soon.

Love this story!!!

Awww thanks. I feel soooooo special. Anyway.... I loved it
Love ya

Woo! I feel special now ahaha!
Good update.
I love that she finally snapped at Josh.
I is happeh you updated!
:D
Can't wait for more!

Before I gets glared at or shot or something....I totally didn't know you updated it. Twice! -glares at email- Otherwise I totally would've read this before anything else cause its my absolute favorite!!!

Anyways! You should listen to me ho! That Justin is bad news! I can't remember why at the moment but yeah! Besides, you totally do love Johnny! WAIT!!! They're going on tour??? Bri's leaving me??? -tears-

ANNNNDDDD oooh cursing in class -waggles finger at- Thats not very lady-like missy! -giggles and huggles- I so proud!! But not of you going out with Justin! He's a total skeez! Who knows what he'll try doing?! Confess your love for Johnny! Do it. Or I'll do it for you -grins evilly-

ANNNDDDD I loved the updates and typing is hard work when you just woke up and you're half asleep still... Just thought you shuld know. If I sound rambly or something...too bad! I refuse to apologize!!! Mwahahahaha!!! More!

Yay! You updated!
Sucks about your foot though... 0.o
But you updated!! Yay!
Ahahaha. '^^
Can't wait for mooooooreeeeee!!
:D

Loved it. Well I hope youre all healed and wont get hurt anytime soon
Love ya

WHAT A CREEP!!!!

Orchestra< That is what my meester is in. -nodnod-

“Nice doodle, mute.”
DUN TALK TO HER THAT WAY!! -punches dude-

“You know, I bet I could really make that little mute mouth of yours scream some day.” Josh whispered in my ear, completely violating my bubble of personal space running his hand down my arm, from my shoulder to wrist.
-death glare- Can I pleeeeaaaaaassssse punch him after you 'tell' me what happened?? Puh-leeeeaaaasssseeeee? -begs and pleads and stuff- If not punch him, I wanna make those objects he wants to use hurt really bad....

GAH! WHAT THE FLYING MONKEYS?! CREEPER MUCH?! That's it. I'm just gonna have to open a big ole can of whoop ass on everybody! Nobody messes with you-erm, Elle, while I'm around. -puts hands on hips-

But I loved it mei mei. I can't wait till the next update -huggles-

Eeehh... Creepy people are creepy. And suck. I don' like 'em...
But! I don't like Justin more than I don't like the creepy pops.
And what is it with the letter 'J'... There are two awesome people with it, then there are two uber creepy people that should get hit in the face with a plane with it... Well, at least it's balanced..?
Okay. So. Ellie=Zacky. Violet=Brian. Elle=Johnny. I'm asuming Matt=Val?... but what about Jimmy? He's too awesome to be single...
So... in case you couldn't tell from all that stuff up there ^, I loved it! =D
<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

aweeee! no Zacky raping :'(
lol tis okay!
i loveded it and it made my shitty mood go away!

You updated and it made me smile happily! And I can't believe I had to go take food gawds! *pouts* but ha! Revenge! Ohmigee purple! Sigh...Justin= soo-pah lame! Johnny is waaaay better *nodnod* more?