Burned - Comments

so i completely understand elle's annoyances with talking to the pros about everything...they label you as stuff your not to make it seem like they did good. *glares at past* well lovely update but it needs more vi hyperness in it!...Jk...or am i? UPDATE!

Poor Johnny.
I feel for 'Elle. I really do. Let's hope she slowly opens up to Johnny-boy huh.
xD
I like the story(Like I've already said, x3) and I can't wai5t for more updates.
Woo! Go JC!

update? ;)

great story!
one thing tho... (I really confused myself when I looked at the characters)
I know that Justin Sane was the name of A7X's original bass player, but thought it was weird that the picture in the character list was the same Justin Sane in the band Anti-Flag, so I looked it up on Wikipedia... basically I got this:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Justin_Meacham
that is the Justin from A7X and this:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Justin_Sane
is the Justin from Anti-Flag. one plays bass, and the other is the guitarist/singer... differnt birth names and they are 7 years apart, yet the picture is the same... hehe... I think wikipedia is suffering from mistaken identity... even in the A7X justin's pic his guitar has anti-flag's logo on it...
ok, i'm done rambling... I just found that interesting... and slightly confusing... lol

ahhh I loves it!
It's got really random extreme similarities to me though!
Like at the high school Vi and I weent to,
The principal's name is Mr. Noack (pronounced exactly as Novak)
and My name Ella came from Danielle
which my best friend decided to shorten to Ellie because Dani was a boys name :P
anywhoreeeeeee
me likey

Oooo I love this already!
Hehe... Johnny's so cute!
I feel bad for Annabelle. Even more so when no one in her family would take her in except her Aunt.
But anyway. I reallly like this story and I can't wait for it to get going. It's going to be a good story. And It's a JC story, so that makes it so much better xD

Love it so far! :D

Woot first chapter!! I like it!!! More!!!

Btw the sentence 'I also don't live in California, so there may be some mistakes in the setting. ' is uber small and can't be read...just thought I'd let you know so you don't get reported ^_^

*pop goes your comment page's cherry*
Holy crap chica...this is gonna be goood!
Hehe you can't spell bass without ass
And awwww....everyone died? Thats gonna mean lots of trauma later...
Can't wait for the chapters to start going up
*Hugs* <3 Shannon!