Burned - Comments

Please post more it really goood!!

God, it's been a while! Nice to have ya' back! =D
Ellie, Violet, and Elle are just as awesome as they always are, and Jimmy is hyperactively awesome. =)
And about Justin... I hate him. Passionately. He's like lemon juice in any open wound. So, to put it simply: I wish for his death. =3
<3 <3 <3
(And awesome! A dedication! Made my day. =D)

yay an update finally

YAY! update!!!
but but but!
I gots no piggy back ride :'(
I still love ya thoughs!!
I wanna sit on Zacky :p

Heeeeeeey that commenter up there likes me! Seee *points up* that one! Noooooo waaaaaay! *waves* Hi! I'm the Violet in this story and ohmigness she actually captured my 'waitress' personality perfectly. I really did talk of imaginary customers! *dances* Well I'm gonna go and talks to Shannon bout her chapter now...kay? Wait...you're not gonna answer me...*walks away*

Shaaaaaaaaannon! *hug tackles* I loooooooved it <3 And my mysterious brown-eyed sexy guy! And my Elliesaurus! I loves her <3 She was also captured perfectly! If you hadn't been talking to us on here and Face'em Book, I'd think you were a stalker >> But even then I'd just dance around and sing about having a new stalker! I've never had one before...I think And I can't wait for mores! But I guess I gots to be all patient and whatnot *pouts* one of those crummy things I suck at! Soooo you should upa-date NLIS sooooon cause I was listening to ze song last night and suddenly remembered you haven't upa-dated that in foooooooREVeeeeeer!....so do soon? Yup, as Elliesaurus' man would say: Do it. *gets up from hug tackle you've been trapped in this entire time* Weeeeeell I'm gonna go has food now....bai bai! *skips away*

I like Ellie and Violet! they're like older vrsions of me. It's almost creepy. =)
And I love Elle! She's awesome in a 'you could be crazy if ya really wanted to way, but you arent cuz you're all pissed off and depressed and shit' kind of way. I like it. =)
So, anyway, you have earned yourself a dedicated reader, lil' miss. =)
<3 <3 <3

Duuude! The new layout is absolutely amazing! But it needs another chapter to be really shiny ;)

loved it!!!

ahhh yay vi bear!
duuudes *smacks johnny*
no being mean!!

Yay! *sings* I haaave arrriived! Thank you very much *bows* but I loveded it sissy <3 moooooore? Or upa-date the cake one so's I can finally start writing on it!!! Do it.

heya so i just read it all! i really loved it and i wish there was more!!
update soon im hooked!

*smacks you upside the head*
THAT! little sissy is for not telling me you upadated THREE TIMES!
grrrr I loveded it though and awweeeee Johnny boo is sooo sweet!

hahaha I couldnt stop laughing...the others around me shushed me cuz of its squealing-ness. BUT I LOVES IT ANYWAYS!! and idk how i had nothing but caps but...yup...and and Zacky...bwahahahahaha! After glow! And and wait....there's no Bri!!!! ish he coming in later with moi??? Hopes so! And Ellie says she demands Zacky. What's really epic is we arre watching live at the LBC and diamonds in the rough thing they did!!!! I loves it!!! and and and um...awes! poor fingers!!!!! i hope they ish feel better soon! and you needs to upa-date soon! yup. on both ^_^

This is very good. I can't wait to see where it goes. I like when you wrote the part about her being invisible and wishing she had better social skills. I hope Johnny will bring out the best in her. Please update soon!

:O :O :O :O :O Annabelle's wall is coming down.....sort of!
I'm sorry about your fingers!
Update soon!

I'm loving this so far. I don't see many Johnny stories on here and I think it is awesome that you're writing one. I like your writing style, you don't leave readers with questions and you are exactly to the point. I feel bad for Annabelle. I wish she'd open up and not be so....harsh, I guess I could say. But if I was in a car accident that killed my entire family, I'd probably act the same way too.

I'm excited to see where you go with this and update soon!

love it!!!!!!

Happy birthday! :)
:D loved it(: please update asap.

Happy birthday dearie!
Well... Looks like Annabelle's kinda S.O.L now.. Hehe.. I love Jimmy. I think.... He might have, quite possibly, had just a smidge too much to drink ;3
Anyway.. The update was pretty spiffy and I want to hug 'Elle. Idk why but I wanna hug her x3

IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII loved it <3
*squeals* JIMMMY!!!! *tackles*
And and And I'm pimping your story see *points to signature* people better reads....
And and And HAAAAAAAAAAAAPPY BIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIRTHDAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!
again
and I goes now....I has meatloaf in oven...