Arrogant Walls - Comments

So, I was finally going top read the sequel to this story, but then I didn't remember how this one ended and I came back to check it. Only to realize I never read the ending. So yeah, I just read the entire thing again, haha.

Like I've said so many times before, I really like your writing. The way you portray the characters is really enjoyable. I love how Pete is Julies big brother. And obviously I adore that you managed to mention DeLeon in this story. He is adorable :).

As the person above me mentioned, there are quite some grammar mistakes in the story, mainly the your-you're and they're-their problems. If you ever decided to do something with this story again, that might be the thing you want to check for.

But other than that, nicely written, as always :).

Good story though!!

You need to check your grammar.
You're- you are
Your- possession
Their- possession
There- place
They're- they are
Too- also
Two- number
To

I subscribed a long time ago but never finished reading. That was absolutely amazing.

Loved your story: )) totally amazing: ))

so...i just read YOUR ENTIRE STORY! haha like i started it oh i dunno 3 or 4 hours ago. and i just read the whole thing. that was AWESOME! i'm kind of sad it's over. but you're an amazing writer. feel free to write a sequel, i'm sure no one would mind!

I loved this story. Great job :D

Great ending for a great story. I'm sure Julie and Brendon will get married ;) I'm sad to see this end. Maybe after a while of not writing you'll just come back and write a sequel =)

I'm sad it's over.... but it was great while it lasted :D
Your a great writter and I loved reading this story.
♥

love the ending :D

awwwwww!!!!!! i loved it!!!! too cute!!!

*claps loudly, but only one in the room* well, well well... that's the end.
:( like i've expressed before, i'm gonna have a tough time letting it go, but. I will eventually.
Thanks for the long nights of reading this beautiful story. :]
It was really entertaining, and the plot was simply amazing.
Hope you make more stories, maybe.

- With Love,
Maxxie.

Question! What did Brendon have on his leg at the beginning when he was sitting on the toilet? (didn't catch it) and ugh I can't believe Pete -___- made me angry, poor Julie and Brendon =/ And super sad to see this ending =/

Loved the update. Sad to see the story go, but I'll get over it. You have the most awesome writing style. :]

Maxxie

love the update :D

Loved the updates. I can't wait until the epilouge.
I'm sad that this story is ending D:
Oh well everything comes to an end.

Brendon and Julie are just too cute togehter! I like how she still think she's still not good enough for him, but likes where she was at the moment, in his arms <3 and the payback, Brendon deserved =P The end was funny. Sad there's not that many chapters left =/

:] i really like this story.
and, i don't want it to end. :P

love the update :D

I really liked this one. I loved her payback and how they joke around. It also seems like she's not uncomfortable with the whole sex thing and stuff like she was before. :)