Thanks for another amazing chapter! <3 Bogart :). I absolutely adore Julie. In real life her attitude would probably piss me off, but for some reason I love how she behaves in the story. Her No..no..okay, yes makes me smile every time. Looking forward to more updates :)!
Although you already got my opinion about the story, I decided I also want to leave you an official comment =). As you know, I like the way you are portraying the characters. I can totally see Pete being a mentor and a teasing big brother at once. And Brendon’s obvious flirting is adorable! But the thing I love most about this story is Julie’s attitude towards everybody and everyone. She is all je m’en fous on the outside, yet she actually seems to care a lot about what people think of her. I’m curious to see how that’s is going to develop as we get further in the story. Other than that, I just want to remind you to keep an eye on your their/they’re/there and your/you’re. But you’re definitely getting better at it!
So, I've finally come around to commenting :). I definitely like the new chapter! I love how Pete and Brendon want to take care of her! And I can totally imagine Brendon saying and asking all those things lol... I'm excited for more :)!
So glad to see you're writing again!! And well, you basically already know how much I love this story :).
“It’s just-” he started “I haven’t met anyone that passionate or serious about music in a while. The last person was Brendon.” Definitely my favorite line so far :).
I must honestly admit I only vaguely remember the outline of the rest of the story, but so in a way it's like reading a completely new story. Cannot wait to read more!
I absolutely adore Julie. In real life her attitude would probably piss me off, but for some reason I love how she behaves in the story. Her No..no..okay, yes makes me smile every time.
Looking forward to more updates :)!