I loved the update and I like the more challenging sentence phrasing. "Fuck, now I have to take a cold shower." Oh horny little Brendon.... I bursted out laughing when I read that :D Also I love the new picture (:
I hadn't been able to read your last couple of updates, but I finally had time. Good Enough[\b]: even though short, it was still great. I like how you make Julie feel like a real person; e.g. her doubting herself that she's the one for Brendon and feeling like she's not good enough (as the title says. And it's cute how Brendon feels that way about Julie. Cold Shower: It was funny and adorable. I feel like we're seeing a more intimate side of their relationship and how it's slowly progressing. Great updates!
don't worry too much about people commenting, if you still have people reading your updates, it means they like it. some people just don't know how to express it. :)
I loved the update and now I will put my whole review in like you did to my story. - I love the story line and plot and how you portray the characters. - Spelling is pretty good, great use of you Mac :D - The writting style bugs me a little, I don't know how I mean that but it's just my opinion. Just the way things are written seem really easy to understand and I like a challenge at understanding something. - I love this story and Brendon (: I hope I didn't offend you. I was honest but sometimes I can be too blunt and brutally honest.
that was probably one of my favorites (if not my favorite) chapter so far! it was just so cute learning more about how he feels about her and stuff. i hope you update again really soon! :)
Oh I don't like it when they fight >.< but letting him read her journal is definitely a step forward to becoming closer as a couple. I hope Brendon can help her with her nightmares!