I quite like this--- I haven't read anything of this type of writing before.
There is a sense of maturity in these chapters that I found myself respecting. I was in awe in the way each sentence drew me in. From the details and symbolism some words took on---particularly those mainly associated with the cold/warmth---I can totally see this being a series of songs. This is very well-structured in my point of view; it's not the typical story setting, but it works. The feel I get from this writing as a reader is this sense of distance and appropriately cold; is it just my imagination?? Implied psychology, maybe? XD But really, my favorite so far is the second and third chapter. It really does make me wonder... are these songs/chapters inspired by a real life girl or relationship??
Good job; I gotta keep reading.
January 17th, 2012 at 12:45am
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There is a sense of maturity in these chapters that I found myself respecting. I was in awe in the way each sentence drew me in. From the details and symbolism some words took on---particularly those mainly associated with the cold/warmth---I can totally see this being a series of songs.
This is very well-structured in my point of view; it's not the typical story setting, but it works. The feel I get from this writing as a reader is this sense of distance and appropriately cold; is it just my imagination?? Implied psychology, maybe? XD
But really, my favorite so far is the second and third chapter. It really does make me wonder... are these songs/chapters inspired by a real life girl or relationship??
Good job; I gotta keep reading.