Message in a Bottle - Comments

I love it I get like that when there is a lot of traffic. I hate it.

i love that they are talking on the phone now!!!!! it's getting real!!!!! please update more!!!! i cant wait anymore!!!!!

I was so essited when I saw you'd posted. I love her reaction to the road rage, and how Zacky just brushed it off. I also like that he's developing feelings for her, even though they haven't met. It's realistic, and it's so cute and it just makes me do a little happy dance in my chair. I'm also liking the fact that your characters are so damn realistic. You bring them to life so well, and it makes me really envy your writing style. This update was amazing as always, dearie, and I can't wait for more!

This is amazing so far. I love it I can't wait for more of it.

Great update! Only caught a few errors, spelling this time :)

Zacky nervous is so cute. XD

Dasha, this chapter was pretty awesome. I loved how you portrayed my personality. I nearly choked on my coffee again, but managed not to. And the last line made me smile too. I wonder what Zacky has to say in defense of himself? And Matt's smart. I love this story. I've been waiting for updates forever, and it made me so essited to see it. Keep up the awesome work!

Finally finished reading... Sorry, it took me a while... I would have read sooner, but I just lost a friend to Thyroid cancer. So reading this story just got that much harder for me. But I will keep reading and commenting. I like it that much. and it really is good.

So, about this chapter. I took the liberty of writing down errors as I read.

Errors:
re-runs on Saturday night live. (should be); re-runs of saturday night live
Reaching over(should have a comma),
"Well*comma* you sound alive and well.
past five years*comma*
living her*e*
hardy *hearty*
to*o* drunk

There were a few more but it was mostly the wrong to, too or what have you. :)

oh my Goddess I love this story:) update soon:P

Wow... I just found this in the new update and I decide to read it. I'm glad I stay up to. This story is amazing I can say you are an amazing writer. I can't wait to see what else happens in next update.... Update soon and awesome job.

i love this :)

This story made me cry cause I was imagining life without my mom and it's hard I would assume...i would never want to lose someone as precious as my mom...Great story more soon!

wow double wow!!!! just found this story and i absolutely fvcking love it!!! please update soon!!!!! its an amazing story and i cant wait till they really meet eachother!!! soooo awesome!

Oh my goodness. I'm so sorry, I didn't get a notification that you had updated. :O
I adore Nikki. She's a seemingly never ending joy and greatly suits the part of JoJo's best friend.
All of the letters are impecabbly written. You can easily read the emotions expressed through out the letters. I'm elated that Zacky has finally admit to being in a band, and sent her a picture of them.
That way, they will be able to continue writing each other without and cautionary lines, trying to hide who they are.
:]

the first is brillant, the emotion and thought in in is wonderfull. I'm going to go back and read the rest later
=D

Loved the update. I think there were only two errors. So good job. Also, I'm sorry if this upsets you, me mentioning errors and whatnot. It's kind of a thing I do, I don't mean to be mean or anything, I feel it's best to hear what is not right in order to help make a better writer.

How can she not know of A7X? They're epic. <3

i loved it :) the letters/emails were very heartfelt and thought out. Please continue :) i hope that they get together somehow :) make Gena cheat on him or something even though i don't encourage that type of thing but still Johanna was made for Zacky :)

I very much enjoyed the update. Also, there were a few errors. But not many. so I give you a metaphorical high five. :D

I love the e-mails. XD