Message in a Bottle - Comments

You're really good at writing the e-mails between the two.
I really enjoy reading those. (:

I liked it. Very well written. Although you did have some errors. So I suggest to you, go back and reread your chapters that are already posted go through and check for errors. And I'd do the same on your upcoming chapters. ^^,

Great chapter, as always. :)
I can't wait to see what Zacky said to her.

This was actually really good! I don't usually read fanfiction, but this I didn't mind one bit! The layout and banner are beautiful, and I am really curious to find out who gets the bottle!! I did find a few gramatical things, but they can be easily fixed if you re-read this.

Again, good job. I really enjoyed this.

Again, I really enjoyed reading the letter from Zacky.
It's very well written and meaningful.
I like Dorian, the main reason being that the name of the cat is Dorian. :]

I'm even more excited for the next one than the last I think.
You're a fabulous writer.
All the meanie silent readers need to comment so you can update more for meee. >:o

That was a great update!
She reeeeally needs to reply to his letter soon :)
Update soon?

Ohmygeee so excited can't wait for the next one. I just started reading and am already anticipating it to be a great fanfiction thank you for the great read until next time

That was awesome. She needs to write Zacky back. XD

I'd like to mention that in this chapter there are a few grammatical errors. I'd have another look see if I were you. :)

But all in all, great update.

I'd like to add that I know what I said and this story are different but similar in some points. I know it sounds odd but it does help a bit.

To say I liked it would be slightly out of context, this story brought back memories of when I had lost my friend to an unfortunate swimming accident. It was sort of a wake up call, I suppose. It actually inspired me to write a new song. So I'd like to say thank you in a way. In all actuallity, this helps me cope with my loss as well as read this story. I'm going to subscribe. :)

Also, I'd go through the chapters again checking for spelling and grammatical errors.

You doing excellent on this story! I think the letter was written very well, like you took the time to think about, and not just write down any old crap. You plot is original, which is always nice to see. Can't wait to continue reading!

Bah, poor Zacky for hitting his head. I hit my head on the doorknob this morning. So Zacky, I feel your pain.
I'm slightly surprised that Zacky told the guys about the bottle. I wasn't sure if he was intending on it or not, but maybe Johanna will be able to help them all mend in some way.
The letter was very considerate and empathetic.
I enjoyed this. :]

The e-mail was very heartfelt. <3
I loved that chapter and I loved Brian. XD
And Zacky, of course.

I really liked reading that e-mail Johanna wrote.
It was really true in a sense.
I can't wait for the next episode.

Ooh, this is really intriguing.
I've noticed that you have a tendency of writing stories that are so different from others.
Kudos to you.
I'm really excited to see how Zacky responds to her email.

I wonder how Zacky is going to respond to that. XD

This is really good!
I cannot wait to read more! <3

I hope she helps Zacky! XD