Grey Wolf Mountain - Comments

...Logan Steele. I like him. :D I also feel kind of bad for him. He found her first. XD

YAY!! New chapter!!!

Chapter 2 was sad... ;_; and bloody. Did you use "college" on purpose? I wasn't sure because I swore you liked "university" much more. I was picturing the police coming in and just standing there while she cried. It was strange. I can't wait for the next chapter! Go Ava go! I hope she meets that man... -_- I don't think I liked him very much.

Redundance:

You're a great writer. And I love this story.

Not to mention I didn't have to hit the 'default layout' for your story. I hate when layout are distracting, but yours is perfect.

I totally agree. It's a goal of mine to always have not horribly distracting or unusually stupid looking layouts. Glad you like the story too :)
Sunny-Lee <3

You're a great writer. And I love this story.

Not to mention I didn't have to hit the 'default layout' for your story. I hate when layout are distracting, but yours is perfect.

I love it. It's very different. And at the same time, it's thrilling. It's a thrilling (and bone-chilling) thriller. ^_^ Yay, first comment! Keep going with it! :D

Favorite line: "She was scared, she was delicious, she was his."

It shouldn't have, but it made me chuckle. Haha.