Chapter 12: Fuck man, where are all these wolves coming from?!?! I'm really really scared for Bryn now! :'( Update soon<3333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333
Hmmmm so the one that took Dawn is from another tribe/band? ~puts thinking cap on~ Bullet for My Valentine???? I don't know if I am close at al! You chick know how to leave a person hanging don't cha!!!!! When I got you comment and notification I was jumping up and down with glee!!!!! Though this chapter maybe short, I loved it because Leana had to put Brynn down so she could save her best friend from getting killed from the wolf that is determine to end both of their lives. She is very brave to stand up to a wolf that could literally tear her apart and she is a human none the less! I am dying to find out what happens next!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
I honestly have no clue who the Lycan that took Dawn away was. Nor do I have a guess of who Layla attacked. Maybe the Barry (Berry?)brothers? That's my best guess.
It was nice seeing more of Layla, but this was a short chapter. Post again soon?
Chapter 11: I'm a little upset that Leana just left Dawn lying there like that, but I can understand that it was for Bryn's protection! I also wanna know who those other wolves were?!?!?!
I have no idea who the new wolves are, but I'll take a guess. Maybe they are enemies of Brian and his friends or they could be the Berry's or Cam/Danny. I'm thinking I'm wrong, but I guessed. I really hope that Brian gets Dawn back and saves her from the new wolf
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG You cannot end this chapter like that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But the way you described how scared Leana was when she was running to keep Bryn safe and how she was pain to leave Dawn behind since she had to keep Bryn safe no matter what. And then Leana gets attacked by another wolf that is not about the pack she knows, but she gets saved before that wolf could do any damage to Leana by Layla. But what really got me shell shocked was that another wolf arrived before Brian and then claimed Dawn as his since he noticed the baby things. I do hope that Brian gets there in time before the wolf takes Dawn away and try to impregnate her. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
No... Don't leave it there! My heart was - still is - in throat. I'm still breathing rapidly. Barely any stories have that effect on me, so kudos! Now where the hell is Brian to come save Dawn? Please update soon - this story is amazing! :)
through the whole chapter I had a concentrated face (thats what my borther said haha) this chaper was...wow! I loved it! xD can't wait for the next chaper!
I really love both stories... It looks like I this story will probably win, but I'm still voting for My Own Flesh and Blood. Now I'm gonna go read that story. Loved the chapter! Must've been a bitch feeding Bryn during that.
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