Scorched Earth - Comments

UPDATE PLEASE!!! I'm in love, and I was so bummed when I found out the last update was like a year ago :(

You updated!! Hahaha. It's like a miracle. I really loved this though, learning more about Melanie and kind of more about Garrett through her. How he treats. Ugh I love them. And Emily and Kennedy make me super sad because I don't want them to be separated! Also loved the part between Emily and Garrett. Too cute. I cannot wait for more!
Update again soon please!!

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This is the best. the best. best. best.

touching kennedy isn't like touching garrett, danicakes?
THEY ARE NOT THE SAME FOR ME
I AM A KENNEDY GIRL.
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You updated?!? Im so happy! Haha. This update was amazing, and I cannot wait for more! I love Kennedy and Emily! They are so cute! And as happy as I am for them, I'm also worried! But I cannot wait for more!!!
Update again soon please!
And congrats on graduating!

“I’m not a fucking duck. A falcon maybe. But not a duck.” trolololololol, a falcon.
This update was great.

Happy graduation!

EMILY'S GONNA BE A MOMMMYYYY!!!!!
AND OMG I TOUCHED GARRETT OMG OMG OMG NOM

lolol, Garrett patrolling with Michael is like me playing Left4Dead with someone other than my best friend--so out of sync. Hahah.

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I love this story so much and now the broness between Garrett and Kenny can, hopefully, resume.

So freaking good. I love this story so much, it's so amazing. I need to know what happens next!!!
Update again soon please!!!

LOVE ME, this needs to be updated everyday. I love this so much :3

tehehehehheeh Garrett saves me.
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Fuck, I love this fucking story so much.
Mmmmm, more, Dani dear. More.

Hey there!
Apologies, I have a habit of being a silent reader. But I'm working on breaking that, so here I am!
First off, this is unlike any Garrett story I have ever read, considered, or written, and I LOVE it.

This has so much potential, plus excitement and drama already! You have a really neat writing style, and the layout is perfect and simple for this. I'm constantly waiting for a new chapter soooo try not to take too long, yeah? Haha.....
But yeah. This was a genius idea, and it's such a blast reading every chapter.

And I hope that battle heals that sudden bridge with Kennedy and Garrett. They need to get back on patrol together! And be bestest friends again in general.
And I'm so relieved Em was all right! I would have cried otherwise. :/

I just found this story, and I am in complete love with it. It is one of the best things I have ever read, EVER!! I love it! It's not just the plot and characters, but how you write it is just amazing. It's crazy good. I can't wait for more!
Update again soon please!

"I mean, the way you spread that peanut butter.” So smooth, lmfao.
SAFJ;SLKDJFLDKS learning about Kennedy and Garrett's attachment after they first got to the camp made me sad and now I love them even more.
THERE'S A TABBY CAT? This just got greater.

uhhhh, I all kinds of love this.

THIS IS ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL. PLEASE I NEED MORE D;

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MORE NOW GO GO GO GO GO GO GO

Please keep writing Dani! I cannot get enough of this, you are a brilliant writer and really make your readers react. I could easily see this being published when it's done. For your fans' sake, me included, don't abandon on this project, EVER!

Wowowow. Okay, I really enjoy this story. I like zombies, but usually I can't read a fan fiction with them in it.

The last line really hit home though.
I just wanted you to know I really like this story.

“Oh, is that what you’re supposed to do? Well, fuck. I’ve been doing it wrong for years.”
DYING HERE.

The ending--I was nearly bawwwlinnngg.
Love the way you compose this!