Scorched Earth - Comments

Dani, this is brilliant. It really is.
i was stoked to see this updated :D
there's so much depth to it, it's just great & makes me want to read more.
btw Garrett kicking ass is always great too, aha.
can't wait to read more.
<3

... I can think of plenty of ways to keep Kennedy in the cabin for two months js js.

beautiful. gut-wrenching. painful. sob-worthy. ugh, dani, you're kill me.

LKFDJLFSDFKJDSKLFJSDFHJLDSKFHSD
I'M SO EXCITED DANI THERE IS SO MUCH QUAL COMING I'M PUMPPPEEEDDDDD.
looovvvveeeeeee yoooouuuuuuuuu.

It's really original. But it scares me to death. And Pat.....Not Pat. I wanna cry. I'm scared of the ending for this story. I hope the apocalypse ends and Garrett learns to live normally, and maybe John and Jared and Tim could show up. maybe.

MY CREYS. MY CREYS. OMG DANI I CAN'T TAKE THIS. I REALLY CAN'T. FIRST YOU HAVE NOMNOM PROTECTOR GAR AND THEN SLEEPY GAR AND THEN SAD MEL-GETS-TO-HELP-HIM GAR. BRB CRYING FOREVER.
OMG THIS IS BEAUTIFUL DANI SO BEAUTIFUL I WANT MORE I WANT MORE GIMME MORE.
AND GAR AND MEL CAN BECOME BESTIES NOMNOMNOM FOREVER.

He died. Crying. John died.
On another note, I was all hyped when they were duking it out, hah.
Danibear, you're so brill ;)
xo

UPDATE DANI, DAMMIT.

this is seriously the best thing ever. it's like i'm reading a novel :)
Dani, you're a brilliant writer. I don't know why I hadn't read your stuff until now.
Love this a lot. Can't wait to see how this all turns out.
Not to mention Garrett is just adorable in this too.
<3

love thissss :)))))
and where am I? no bueno.
haha, just kidding, anywho this was lovely.

UPDATE THIS AGAIN SOON BEAUTIFUL.

This phrase made me smile like nothing in the world: "He nodded in assent, glancing back at the mess hall. “The minute this damn apocalypse is over, I’m getting a damn cheeseburger. Hell, I’m getting five.” "
Your story is AMAZING, please don't stop writing it. I love zombie movies, but this is the first time I truly read a zombie story. I find it better even, I could picture everything in my head.

Your writing style is equally amazing, it keeps readers craving for more. You should get this published when it's done, honestly. And the plot is interesting as well. I'm wondering what's going to happen between Gar and Mel ;).

OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD

OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD

LOL AT THE GIRL GRABBING GARRETT'S LEG. OMG. AND FAIRY PRINCESS. THE MENTAL IMAGES ARE TOO GOOD.
okok.
This is brilliant, yayaya.

I love it when Tumblr directs me towards good stories.
I love Garrett stories.
I love zombies.

OH MY GOD I AM A KID.
HAHAHAHA, HOW QUALITY.
NOW, MAKE JOHN A KID THAT LIKES ME ;)
THIS IS SO FUCKING AMAZING, DANI DEAR.
I LOVE IT SO MUCH. I LOVE YOU MORE (:
XO

OH OKAY SO I JUST READ THIS AND OMG IT WIS FABULOUS AND I LOVE IT OMG.

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE

OH MY GODDDD DANI WHY ARE YOU SO FANTASTIC I CAN'T EVEN RIGHT NOW
THIS IS FAB
HAHAHA @ EM TRYING TO STEAL PEANUT BUTTER
WHAT EVEN
SHE'S CRAY

I JUST WANT MORE NOW
KENNENE IS DUMB
BUT GAR IS TOTALLY IN LOOOOOOVVVVVEEEE
BE STILL, MY BEATING HEART <3

So I'm actually going to subscribe to this since it's probably the best apocalypse fiction with a sprinkle of romance that I've read in a good while. Even though we've only seen a couple sides of Garrett as of right now, he's still a very interesting character and leaves the reader wanting to hear more from him, along with how this entire apocalypse will affect him.

The intrigue that the girl gives is very well done with it not being too much or too little or the slightest Mary Sueish. I've been wondering if this boy is her brother or son or just a kid she knows, but no matter what, she certainly has a fierce motherly/sisterly sort of feel for him; I'm pretty sure she doesn't want to just protect herself when she's asking for that gun.

The layout is great, and the title is absolutely brilliant for the story. It certainly attracted my attention like, the minute I saw it in the thread.

Lovely work :D

I love this so far.
Please update soon :)

Omg, during the zombie apocalypse they joke about Garrett loosing weight and cheeseburgers. So great.
THIS IN NO WAY IS TOO LONG, IT IS LIKE THE PERFECT LENGTH.
Yeah. I really like this.

The banner and layout are very attractive, very good job on those :). Plus, the Maine is pretty damn beast haha :).

Okay, so he like protects the camp site right? Oh, from zombies. Kind of a weird twist, that sounds pretty cool. Kind of creepy though, this will be a suspenceful story :). Oooo, do i sense a romance between Lucy and Garrett ;). I really like this! But uh oh, what did Garrett see?

I love this idea so much, it's cool to make it a fan fiction too :). You're doing a beautiful job writing it, wonderful job! Keep it up :D.