Scorched Earth - Comments

Melanie's freak out comments are highly amusing.
But, oh my fuck, this is so fucking good, honey.
WRITE MORE MORE MORE MOREEEEEE.
I NEED MORE, OK, OK. I LOVE YAH.
xo

GIRLIE YOU KNOW WHAT I JUST REALIZED? THE NEXT CHAPTER IS CHAPTER THREE OH MY GOD SDJKGHALIRUDGHJDFGKDAHGLRDHFKG
I DON'T EVEN KNOW I AM SO EXCITED POODLE SAW ME AND LOOKED AT ME AND YUP IT'S GREAT BUT KENENENE THINKS I'M ANNOYING BUT HE CAN SMD BECAUSE HE'S STUPID AND DOESN'T KNOW ANYTHING BUT SHHHHHHH DON'T TELL EM SHE'LL GET MAD OMG
BUT DANI
FRSRS
SRSBSNS
GFACE.
POODLE.
PAID.
ATTENTION.
TO.
ME.
YUP.
LIFE IS GREAT.
loljk it's a zombie apocalypse but omg idec i luff him and you and it but no worries in all different ways 'cause it'd be kinda sketch if i loved you like i loved him, let alone your story omg yeah whatever.

I like it :)
Keep Up the good job.

i'm still deciding whether or not I should give you a rage comment or not. we'll see tomorrow how I feel.
and jsyk, I could have put my Kennedy idea into the ending and it would have been so seamless and it probably would have only taken you about like 3 or 4 extra sentences.
JSYK
I'll comment again tomorrow. it might just be more rage. it might not.

WHOA
WHOA WHOA WHOA
IS THIS ZOMBIE?

BECAUSE DAYUM, GURL, PLEASE NEVER STOP WRITING
I LOVE ME SOME ZOMBIE-FIGHTING POODLE, MMKAY?
KEEP GOING, I WANT MOOOAAARRR :D

I'm so excited for this.
AND Ryan Adams?

Great.

BUT OMG DANI YES EM IS RIGHT
POODLE SHOWER NOMNOMNOM
THAT DESERVES IT'S OWN COMMENT.

BUT OMG HOW IS HE SURVIVING WITHOUT ALL HIS TOOTHPASTE OMG.

YEAH THERE ARE SO MANY THUNGS TO SAY HERE DANI I CAN'T EVEN HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
OMG OMG OMG YEAH MY THOUGHTS ARE TOO SGUDSBHHFVNJGGHGDDDH RN IMMA COMMENT BETTER LATER KYFFDDYVVKGDVH

melanie said it all
yay for posting this and making me happy
ah! I am so excited! eeeeeeep!
love you boo
xo

holy shit. mel. seriously.
holy. shit.
mmmmm beautiful. and that's not just because Garrett's showering in this... ;)

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