Led by Pride - Comments

ohhhh .. this one was good!! :) keep it going pleasee

Can't wait until it turns happy again!! Loved it

PLEASE TIMES A MILLION UPDATE!!! THANK YOU! :)

woooow now I'm very curious about what is going to happen.. I hope they sort things out =/

FUUCK what is with brian!!!

I think Brian is a total tool. I can't believe he's acting this way. Just open your freaking mouth and talk to Angie instead of screwing the slut doctor! Looking forward to the next one!

what the crap! what in the world is Brian thinking!?!?!? please update again soon, I have to know what happens next!!!

My fucking God, Brian, are you serious? You've got to be fucking kidding me. He KNOWS she hates that man's guts, and even his feelings right now don't justify his reaction to what he just saw. As of right now, I don't know whether I want Angie to bust his ass so I can feel a little bit of revenge, or for her not to find out so she won't be totally crushed. And as for that doctor? I'd report her ass so fucking fast her head would spin.
Gah, you've got me all worked up and I LOVE it! I cannot wait for the next chapter ;)

Awh, poor Brian. He feels like he's losing the people he loves and Angie doesn't even realize. I wonder if she's going to find out about the "bruise" on Dr. Haynes' neck....hmmm? Loved the update though, I can feel the emotions jumping off the page. Hope you had fun at Download! :) <3

I feel like Brian's feelings in this situation are totally justified. What I don't agree with was what he did with Doctor Haynes. I feel like when Angie finds out - and I have a strong feeling she will, one way or another - that shit is gonna hit the fan. I'm feeling kinda anxious about all of this, and I will eagerly await the next time you are able to update. <3

I am in love with this! Hopfully it gets happy soon for them!

Ok David needs to but his nose out of everything like yesterday. Yeah yeah I know he's missed a lot of his daughters life, but it was his own fault. Not that I am defending Angie in any way. I still say she could have handled everything a lot better than she has.

And even though I know I should be mad at Brian, I just can't. He's justified in feeling the way he does, the scene in the bathroom between them was perfect. And I'm finally glad to see Angie show a bit of remorse. I know I'm horrible for picking on the pregnant woman, but I don't care she's made so many more mistakes than Brian has. Sue me....<333

Oy Brian..tsk tsk tsk..stupid move, but I cannot wait for the update! : )

woah! stupid stupid Brian!!! can't wait to see what happens next :)

FUCK no! can't wait to read what happens next!

Now that my life has finally calmed down some, I'm all caught up!
And can I say OMG I can't believe Brian did that! What a freaking jerk move!
Anyways, really curious to see how it all turns out!

I've already told you this doesn't disappointment me in the slighest. Not a big Angie fan, because she has made many mistakes in her relationship with Brian, and never once did he waver in his devotion towards her. Was it wrong? Well, yeah, but it is also understandable. She has been so focused on her own feelings, and taking care of Ava, and then situation with David, it's pretty clear to me that Brian has been low on the totem pole so to speak. I also think Dr. Haynes has seen a lot more than she lets on. I don't believe she set out for this to happen, and sure, she should have put a stop to it, but it happened. Now I only hope he doesn't let guilt consume him, because even if he was wrong, it was bound to happen at some point. And no I don't feel the least bit sorry and I don't feel more empathy towards Angie. Yeah, she's got a lot on her plate and perhaps if she had been a little less selfish she would have noticed the man who married her, loves her was hurting jsut as much as she was. That is all....<33

You've got to be fucking kidding me. I love Brian to death and I understand the fact that he's hurting, but this is fucking ridiculous. If I could, I would slap him across the face multiple times. God, I'm so angry right now, and I LOVE it. I love that you write stories that actually make me feel something. I'll be anxiously awaiting the next update, hun.

All caught up!! Yay me!!

I'm not going to lie and say I'm a big fan of Angie, because I'm not. Even though I know she and Brian both had the best intentions for Ava, I still felt from the beginning something was going to happen to bring David back into their lives. And look, he's back. I agree with Heather...I don't think David is going to fade away into the background after his part has been played. I just hope Angie doesn't let him manipulate her like he's done so many times in the past. And I know she did it for Brian, but it still didn't make it right in my opinion.

Brian is as always, a constant by her side, never wavering in his devotion to her or either of their children. And I do see him as Ava's father, anyone can donate DNA but it takes a true man to be a daddy, and Brian is that through and through.

Love Jimmy in this.He is sunshine wherever needed...I miss Stuart and Neil I hope there is more of them with Bella in future chapters.

As for this new baby, I am happy they are getting the baby they want, but I'm worried that the baby is going to end up being the person that saves Ava in the end and telling David will have been for naught. I'm not sure how Ava is going to accept David, but being so young she's going to want know more about him and I don't think she's strong enough to know how bad of a person he really is. But to give him the benefit of the doubt, maybe finding out about Ava will help David become a better man in the long run.

This comment was jumbled but I think I hit all the key points. And even though I'm not a fan of Angie, I will say, my heart goes out to her. No mother should ever have to see a child sick. Esp with leukemia. Cancer in any form is rough. I've seen to many people I love lose their battle with it, and because of that I'll go easier on her....as long as she doesn't fuck up again. <333

Ugh, David is such a....douchebag! I wish I could punch him as much as Brian does. At least he's being kind and helping Ava get better, but still. He needs to stop rubbing crap in Angie and Brian's faces. Can't wait to read more! :)