Led by Pride - Comments

Loved it!

I just... I still don't know how I feel about David. I still feel like even though he wants to save his daughter, he's gonna abuse this chance and ruin every fucking thing. Something about him just seems off to me.

update update update!!!!! pleaseeeeeeeeee and thank you

Well, I'm glad that David at least acted like a halfway decent human being rather than being a complete asshole, like he usually is. That was pretty smart of Brian, mentioning her name, pulling out the picture. I think David just needed to see a picture of her and see that she was just a little girl, his little girl.

Even though he's a bastard.

Loved it! I'm glad that he's going to do it. I was figuring he'd give them more problems than he did.

Well, I'm glad that David at least acted like a halfway decent human being rather than being a complete asshole, like he usually is. That was pretty smart of Brian, mentioning her name, pulling out the picture. I think David just needed to see a picture of her and see that she was just a little girl, his little girl.

Even though he's a bastard.

Loved it! I'm glad that he's going to do it. I was figuring he'd give them more problems than he did.

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Wow, this story's really moving.... i love it!! when's the next update?

Go Brian! Glad something positive is hopfully coming out of this..can't wait for more!

I'm so proud of Bri for not beating the shit out of David. What he did was the very best course of action in this case. As for David... As much as I hate him for what he did to Angie in the past, if he comes through for them and saves Ava's life... I hate to say this, but I may have to forgive him.

I'm gonna take a stab at this predicting business and say that Ollie won't be a good enough match and they'll have to hunt down that scumbag David.

Darn you, woman!

But, if it saves Ava, that's a-okay. If David stirs up trouble though....I will cheer if Brian leaves him in a whimpering heap on the floor.

Wow, that really is a new low. Not only is her daughter battling cancer, but now the fuckhead she tried to kick out of her life permanently has to be brought back into it. I can already see that the loser is gonna cause problems - especially regarding the kids.
Despite the bad news, I LOVED the update hun :)

So saaaad =( But i loved the update.

I really love the dynamic of this story. I can feel the emotions that Brian and Angie are going through dealing with Ava being sick, with the ups and downs, happy points and sad points. Brilliantly written and I can't wait for more!

<3

I am equally excited and terrified about the "interesting" part. I figure that eventually David's gonna come back into the picture...And that would be interesting...but you could also mean interesting about Ava's condition...which wouldn't be interesting, it'd be terribly sad if it got worse. I just hope that Ava will be okay. It's hard, what they're going through, but I have hope in you that you'll get Ava through it all fine and dandy!

Can't wait for more! =}

Hopfully its a good interesting..=) can't wait for the next update!

Yayy for being pregnant :) And I'm so glad that Jimmy is able to make Ava laugh; she really needs that, and there would honestly be no one better to make you smile in a situation like that.
...Interesting? And then a :/ face? Uh oh. If I wasn't captivated before (which I was), I sure as hell am now.

poor little Ava...hopefully everything turns out well for her!

I think it would be cute if she was pregnant, I just hope Ava wouldn't think they're trying to replace her. Can't wait for more! <3

Awww, that's what I think I'd hate about chemo the most: losing my hair. I'm not a vain person, but still. I'd really miss my hair.

I bet she's preggers! I bet she is!

This one hits a little too close to home for me. Not so sure I can see Ava go through this.