I like how you get the dark feel of the books into this story. That's hard to achieve for some, I think. I also like how you made sure that the brothers stay close like that. A lot of stories seem to venture off where one of the twins are practically out of the picture, which wouldn't make sense given how close the two are.
I've been wondering if you're going to go with J.K. Rowling's wishes and have him marry Angelina, or just go with the book where it doesn't mention them...I don't think? At least, I don't remember...I haven't read the last book in some time haha. Either way, I'm curious to see how this plays out. I'm also excited because there will be a sequel! :)
Anyways this was a wonderful update and I can't wait for more.
As always, an amazing chapter, even if it was a bit short. I can't wait to see what's coming up in the next chapter. I will be eagerly waiting for an update!
Oh dear friend, where do I even begin to start on this story?
One, I am so happy that you’re writing not only in general but a fanfic, and a Weasley one at that! You are so wonderful with words it’s a real shame and loss when you’re not writing.
I think I will start with your writing style and just all of it in general. It’s a different style of writing and I really enjoy it. I loved how you used to write - don’t get me wrong - but I’m liking this way as well. You certainly have improved.
Now on to our lovely main character, Mignon Fidere. She is so different from *coughtheocough* but I really enjoy her. She’s shy, smart, quiet, and polite. All the things a Hufflepuff should be and I’m glad that you didn’t make it where you’re left wondering why she was put into the house she was. Also, big kudos for writing about hufflepuff, sadly they seemed to be always put down, which is a shame because I see nothing wrong with Hufflepuffs.
I also like Mignon is a bit sassy. I love it. It makes her much more believable when they how flaws and weaknesses. But also their strengths. But then again, you’ve always been great with making your characters believable. Also making sure that they develop.
Now on to Mr. George Weasley, I love how you portrayed him and, well, every other original character from the books. You really have a knack for keeping everyone in character.
I actually don’t mind that this story jumps. Usually I do, because I feel the characters never really get to connect and that everything is just rushed. But Min and George just really seemed to connect, so it works. It also shows how amazingly talented you are.
All in all this story is amazing. I love it so much and I look forward to whatever else you have planned for Min.
Omg. This was so sad. At first I laughed because of 'Kitchen George' and 'Shower George' and then it was a bit cute then BAM sadness and fear then just complete heartbroken-ness. Poor Min, she really can't get much a break as of late.